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Lining commented on the post, Lying on Blue
Dear Huiwen:
I am happy after reading your poem, “Lying on Blue,” because I like what you said about how you carried the people, You wrote a beautiful poem.
One part of your poem that stands out for me is where you said: “ I love my neighborhood.” I think this is great because I love my neighborhood too.
Thanks for your poem. I look forward…Read More -
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The birds- seagulls are always flying behind the cloud. And they always see the cloud are not moving. They feel strange that why the cloud not moving, the cloud is not boring? The birds- seagulls can’t u
Read MoreThe birds- seagulls are always flying behind the cloud. And they always see the cloud are not moving. They feel strange that why the cloud not moving, the cloud is not boring? The birds- seagulls can’t understand that. In...
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Lining commented on the post, Me, Immigration, AND Justice
Dear Menga,
I am Excited about your Me, Immigration, AND Justice because I like you said you are good at helping children and kids. I like this too.
One thing you said that stands out for me is: “ I became good at this because I have a older sister to help me how to do a good volunteer and to take care of the kids or children.” I think this is…Read More
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Lining commented on the post, People are made of their knowledge
Dear Manuel,
I am excited about your post because you wrote very well in your post
One thing you said that stand out for me is: “ I dream of making people happy and help them.” I think this is interesting because I want to this too.
Thanks for your project. I look forward to seeing what you write next because you did very well in this post. I w…Read More
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Lining wrote a new post
My name is Lining Liang and I was born in 2003. I am 14 years old. I have lived in Guangzhou, China. Guangzhou is a big and beautiful city. In Guangzhou, you can eat many different types of Chinese food, like
Read MoreMy name is Lining Liang and I was born in 2003. I am 14 years old. I have lived in Guangzhou, China. Guangzhou is a big and beautiful city. In Guangzhou, you can eat many different types of Chinese...
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Dear Lining:
I am interested your post, “Me, Immigration and Justice,”because you said you want to become a good person and help other people to let them stay healthy.One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is In the future, I would like to be a pharmacist because I want all the people in the world to be healthy. I dream of becoming a successful person, to become a successful a pharmacist, to cure more patients.” I think this is grateful because to help other people is good decision ever. This remind me of an experience I had is help your family. Thanks for your writing I look forward to seeing what you write next, because i would like to know about your dream and i would like to know what your parent think about your dream.
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Dear Lining:
I am inspired by your post,”Me, Immigration and Justice,” because I like that what about you write. One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is ” a man walked to the front of me and said “Oh! Chinese girl is beautiful. I love Chinese girl.” In my opinion, this was unjust because this man did not respect me.” I think this is horrible because these men have nothing to do except to drive to the girls. Thanks for your writing I look forward to seeing what you write next, because it’s interesting to read about you, to know your opinion or to know more things about you.
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Dear Lining,
Your point of view about your neighborhood is very admiring. It seems like you really enjoy being in your neighborhood and it seems like you’re in love with it. I also like that you described your neighborhood in a very creative way. You used a bird and a cloud which is a fantastic choice. Thank you and I hope I get to hear more of your work.