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The Sky is Going to Kill Me View Comment
  • @LilyVJudge
  • December 10, 2021

I really like your poem, you got my attention instantly with the first couple of words "the sky is going to kill me". I really like how detailed and poetic you were and I love the use of personification. Amazing poem!

Broken Arm View Comment
  • @LilyVJudge
  • December 10, 2021

I really like how you effortlessly set the setting. I really like your poem I think adding a metaphor or other figurative language would add to your poem nicely. I liked the part when you said you thought you were dreaming when you woke up and saw the doctors...

I really like how you used evidence to support both sides of the argument if sending people to mars is a good idea. I agree that it would be dangerous still to send them there especially to live there for long periods of time. I think that there should...

Why am I scared of clowns? View Comment
  • @LilyVJudge
  • December 10, 2021

I like how you used your own personal example to support your argument. I think that this phobia affects people in different ways and I agree with you that the face paint and exaggerating of facial features are the main reason why people don't like them. I think it...

Herd Mentality View Comment
  • @LilyVJudge
  • November 5, 2021

I really like your topic. I feel like herd mentality is especially prevalent in schools, but not only do individuals feel the need to fit into a group but other people in society expect others to put themselves into a group and conform. What are some solutions you feel...

Fate is Real? View Comment
  • @LilyVJudge
  • October 19, 2021

I do agree that the belief in fate depends on the person and what comforts them. I didn't know that fate and destiny were different I always thought they meant the same thing. I think it would be interesting to see if people who grew up in a religious...

Assembled Idea View Comment
  • @LilyVJudge
  • October 19, 2021

I find the quote really interesting, I think it would be cool if in the background there is a picture of a mouth or something. What does this quote mean to you?

107 year old Twins?? View Comment
  • @LilyVJudge
  • October 19, 2021

I found this really interesting, I wonder why they were being bullied for being twins and why they were separated. Maybe it would be interesting to research the stigma on twins in Asian countries

Social Media Free Speech View Comment
  • @LilyVJudge
  • October 1, 2021

I think that schools shouldn't regulate private social media, but if a student's concerning behavior online has been brought to the school's attention they should have a meeting with the parents and student about it. I really liked this article

Dealing with the Hate View Comment
  • @LilyVJudge
  • September 24, 2021

I really like your poem. I like how you reference your body as a place to help people. You use your body to do good and use it to better humanity not make it worse. If you let it, your body can do amazing things.

Was it worth it? View Comment
  • @LilyVJudge
  • September 24, 2021

I agree with you, many people especially the younger generation aren't well informed about the events that happened after 9/11. Many people have died who didn't deserve it and it makes you wonder if our government made the best decisions and choices regarding the events after 9/11.

Children Hospitals Need Help! View Comment
  • @LilyVJudge
  • September 24, 2021

Many people are now not wanting to work in hospitals because the jobs are very difficult physically and emotionally. I find it interesting that not only are they understaffed in ICUs and ERs but also in children's hospitals. I think that hospitals need more funding to get enough resources...

Asteroids Have Names ? View Comment
  • @LilyVJudge
  • September 17, 2021

Who among the people who have an asteroid named after them is most inspiring to you? What are their accomplishments?

How Do Concussions Affect Teenagers? View Comment
  • @LilyVJudge
  • September 17, 2021

What are some ways we can limit the risk of severe concussions for children? For example, could football helmets be changed in order to make them more effective in stopping concussions?

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