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I love this small story. I find I can imagine it in my own head and it almost feels nostalgic. I love the word choice you use to describe every scenario and I love that it adds a humor factor to the story. It was fun imagining little you...
I like how it rhymes and that you use the last words to contradict the second part of your poem. I like how thoughtful and vivid this poem is. I could imagine parts of the poem in my mind.