• dear Eros
    I am proof of your letter about your story, “My True Feelings” because I like the way you showed Dee voice as a writer to express through her letter to say what she wants from her family. And this is a situation of many families that has some problems they can just figure out the solution by writing a letter. One line that stands out…[Read more]

  • Leticia commented on the post, Sisterhood 1 month, 2 weeks ago

    dear Fatoumata
    I am touching about your short story, “Sisterhood” because your story demonstrates there is relationship with sister even though her Maggie was closer than her with their mother. One line that stands out for me is, “The thing my Mama and Maggie did not understands we are a family and this will not change.” I think his line is powe…[Read more]

  • dear Khadjia,
    I am proud of your poem, “My Beloved Daughter” because your story demonstrates how a mother can love her daughter and share the affection that she has with her daughter. One line that stands out for me is, “My Maggie, My daughter, The love of my life.” I think his line is fascinating because your story to attract and hold attenti…[Read more]

  • I have been dying to tell you what happen today in my life. I wake up every day and I don’t feel happy with my life because I think everything about me does not worth. I don not feel happy with my life b

    • Dear Leticia.
      I am choosing an adjective showing emotion of excited about your story. your story, “It Is How I feel In Real Life” because I like the way that you give voice to a person that you are written for. And this is a situation that many problems have struggling for in reality life thanks to our society influence.
      One line that stands out for me is,“She does not fortify me with many powerful qualities because she never encourages me like she used to do with Dee.” I think this line is thought-provoking because it catching my attention to know more why you give her voice in your story . Since this sentence have a strong powerful definition to understand your still written.
      Another line that stands out for me is, “Despite that my mother’s attitude was like I liked her and I will always protect her.” I think this line is compelling because it makes me think in which level mothers are important in our like. And their value is so bigger since we don’t have the right to judge them just love them despite all the things they are doing for us.
      Your Story helps me to understand a story that I once read on everyday use because in this story it was a problem of a families that one sister was burned and others one no . Then the burn sister the situation was hard for her . I find it was unfair, however when I read your story I realize I’m totally wrong because no human on this earth is perfect so we should love our family specific our mothers.
      Thanks for your Story I look forward to seeing what you make next . Since I would like to see different type of story in others situation that people don’t consider it . Then using some of strategies elements that we can feel it more. And those can of thing will bring me back to see others creations you made.

    • Dear Leticia,
      I am curious about your short story “It’s How I Feel in Real Life”, because I would like to know how Maggie is seen her life through her sister. Your story is great and I like the way you are using imagery to describe things. One line that stands out for me is “ Moreover, I am a burn victim and since that day my mother starts to describe me in less than flattering terms such as a wounded animal who must live her life forever overpowered to forces bigger than her own will.” I think this line is interesting, because Maggie is describing herself of how people see her or treat her. For me she is trying to send a message to her family to consider her as a person not an animal.
      Another line that stands out for me is, “Also I can thank her because I become more confident after my sister comes to ask about her quilts and then mama defends my best interests” I think line is fascinating because despite all that Maggie endure, she is thankful her mother because she is now defending her and Maggie feels like she is understanding that way her mother and sister play. Thanks for your story, I look forward to seeing what you make next time and I will be so happy to read more of your story. Keep up the good context of writing and can wait.

    • Dear Leticia
      I am adoring by your short “It Is How I feel In Real Life” because I like how you used Maggie’s point of view to show how she feel about her life. One set of lines that stands out for me is, “I am rarely present even when I try to pronounce complete sentences.” I think this line is striking because it demonstrated that Maggie did not go to school. Therefore she did not have the opportunity. However her sister went to school. It show how their mother prefer Dee to Maggie. Another line that stands out for me is, “ Despite that my mother attitude was like I liked her and I will always protect her. Also I can thank her because I become more confident after my sister comes to ask about her quilts and then mama defends my best interests.” I think these lines are intriguing because she was saying that her Mama did not love as her sister but at the end she defended her. Your Story remind about our neighborhood back home in Africa. That were two sister whom was always fighting because the eldest one was less beautiful. Therefore she was less popular in school and she stoop going to school because did not have confidence in her. Thanks for your story. I look forward to seeing what you make next. The next story I would like to see you writing about Dee’s point of view. I’m curious to see how you will interpreted it.

    • Dear Leticia,

      I like your story “It Is How I feel In Real Life” because it shows the insecurities that Maggie has to deal with due to her body scars.It also stresses on the power of words and how the words can deeply affect someone’s live. One line that stands out for me is ” I am someone who is barely recognized or even noticed by the world because I am silent and distant. ” because it shows how deeply Maggie affected by her body scars. She almost feel invisible and she doesn’t have a voice. This trauma affected her whole life and she carry it with her. Another line that made me curious is “Despite that my mother attitude was like I liked her and I will always protect her.” . It shows how thankful Maggie is despite the negative attitude that she gets , she is till grateful for her mother . I look forward to read more of your stories and i would like to know why Maggie still grateful to her mother even though her mother didn’t value her.

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