Dear Leslie,
I really enjoyed reading through your blog post. The hook at the beginning really want me to want to read even more. I also really enjoyed the background that you gave us on this topic. For example, “They did labor work and were rarely fed and part of that place in time Jewish people who were kept captive were often used for experiments.”. You told us exactly who was experimented on and who did the experiments. Overall, you had a lot of evidence and all of the evidence connected to your main topic, which is that human experimentation is not right and it is not ethical.

Dear Leslie,
Hey girl!!!! I am shocked about what your wrote because human experimentation shouldn’t have to happen to people especially to people that just wanted to live their life but couldn’t. One sentence that stood out to me was “They ruined her reproductive system and put her through a lot of pain for their scientific needs. Some people may think that human experimentation in general is helpful, but I think it shouldn’t be done because it harms a human life when it shouldn’t have never been harmed in the first place even for the expense of others.” This stood out to me because it’s true that human experiments harm human and it shouldn’t be this way. People that had to experience the brutal and painful experiments shouldn’t had to face that and should have the say. Thank you for writing. I look forward to seeing you write more because your writing can be very important.

Dear Leslie,
I was really interested in what you had to write, you wrote really good things. You really organized your blog very neatly which made it easier to read and got me hooked on to reading more. You gave really good evidence and supported it with great analysis. You didnt just summarize it, you went beyond and helped me understand the quotes better. Your background for your blog was very interesting which made me more eager to read more. But very good job on typing this, it was vey good.

Sincerely,
Natalie