Dear Ian: I am calmed by your reading of Rachel Sherwood's poem, “the World in the Evening,” because the words give a very calm vibe. Also the title is very calm. One line that stands out for me is, “voices sound like echoes in these streets." I think this line is...

That is very common in families. I think that that is important to the story.

This is an interesting idea. The baby might grow up without a father but they are still happy.

I think that this is really important to the story. That is why I think it is one of my better comments.

I think that this is an important idea. There is a lot of love and hate in this book.

I picked this because I think that it shows how worried she is. I think that is also interesting how she is dreaming about their problems.

I think that they should be used for the police but should not be released to the general public. The reason for this Is you don't know who you might be scarring for life.

I think that you really explained the turning point of the character well. I like how you described what he used to be like and what made him what he is like now. This was a well written essay and you analyzed the book well.

I think that it should be up to the business if they use cash or not but if it is something that is an essential business I would say that cash and card should be allowed.

I think that is also important to mention that she killed coin because she saw that she was not looking for equality. This relates to now because it is important that we don't try to become more powerful we should try to make everybody equal.

This would leave the reader excited because when he gets to Hogwarts is when everything cool happens. Also the way he finds out he got in is cool.

I really like how you explained American values. I feel like it is important to know what drives Americans. This way it will be easier to understand our country.