• Dear Leticia:

    I am facinating with your essay, “Stories about Equality,” because the way that you explained the three short stories and connected to the society issues was great. Also what you wrote in the end about people do not have the right to dominate another one its important because many people take adventage of others. One set of l…[Read more]

  • Dear Celines:

    I am fascinated with your essay, “Society and its Inequalities,” because you make really good connections between the three short stories and how those issues is affecting in todays world. Also, I did understant the essay more easy because it was well organized. One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is: “The short story…[Read more]

  • Lenin commented on the post, Three Life Lesson 3 weeks ago

    Dear Fatema:

    I am impressed with your essay, “Three Life Lesson” because you explained really well the similarities and differences between the three stories. Also, you give a brief definition of the literary elements used in the stories wich is helpful. A set of lines you wrote that stands out for me is: “This story is different from “The L…[Read more]

  • Dear Leticia:

    I am thankfull whit your short story, “It Is How I feel In Real Life” because it is showing more character traits of Maggie. It also show the problems that maggie has in her life due to her scars. One line that stands out for me is, “I am someone who is barely recognized or even noticed by the world because I am silent and d…[Read more]

  • Lenin commented on the post, My true feelings 3 weeks, 1 day ago

    Dear Eros:

    I am adsorbed by your letter, “My true feelings” because many parents reject their children and don’t support then in the obstacles of their lives. Many childs has to face their obstacles alone because they don’t a have a family how supports it. One set of lines that stands out for me is, “Even though we never had the closest…[Read more]

  • Lenin commented on the post, Maggie's Diary 3 weeks, 1 day ago

    Dear Celines:

    I am gratefull with your short storie, “Maggie’s Diary” because by reading this short story, we a can imagine who maggie was feeling in those key moments in “Every Day Use”. Also, it demostrate us that our family is the most important thing we have. One line that stands out for me is, “I was in shock and Mama told me that the…[Read more]

  • This three short stories: “Everyday Use” by Alice Walker, “The Lesson” by Toni Cade Bambara, and “How to Date a Brown Girl (Black Girl, White Girl, or Halfie)” by Junot Diaz would make a good set for further stu

    • Dear Lenin
      I was really amazed by the way you wrote your analysis about the three stories that you entitled “Literary Analysis Comparing Three Stories” because there are some really highlighted parts that makes your analysis really powerful. The first part is “three stories are similar to each other because all the characters are learning something in different situations”. I totally agree with what you said because in the “Lesson” story the kids learned something really important from their teacher who is Ms.Moore. In the story “How to Date a Brown girl”. The narrator is learning how to date girls in differentes races. In the story “Everyday Use”, the sister’s mother is learning from her only child who had education. The second part is “three stories are similar because the main characters are learning in different situations. Either through poverty or from someone with experience in life”. I really like this part of your writing because all three stories are talking about inequality and bringing the fact that people are learning from their financial status is clever. The third part of your analysis is “this set of short stories are good to study in high school or college because it teaches us a lot of different topics such as culture, appearance, wealth gap, and something very important that is education”. I think it is really clever to bring up the fact these stories are importantes because many students who want to pursue their career in this path, this is like a previous to them. Thank you so much for your analysis “Literary Analysis Comparing Three Stories” . I am really looking forward to seeing what you will accomplish next.

    • Dear Lenin
      I was really amazed by the way you wrote your analysis about the three stories that you entitled “Literary Analysis Comparing Three Stories” because there are some really highlighted parts that makes your analysis really powerful. The first part is “three stories are similar to each other because all the characters are learning something in different situations”. I totally agree with what you said because in the “Lesson” story the kids learned something really important from their teacher who is Ms.Moore. In the story “How to Date a Brown girl”. The narrator is learning how to date girls in differences races. In the story “Everyday Use”, the sister’s mother is learning from her only child who had education. The second part is “three stories are similar because the main characters are learning in different situations. Either through poverty or from someone with experience in life”. I really like this part of your writing because all three stories are talking about inequality and bringing the fact that people are learning from their financial status is clever. The third part of your analysis is “this set of short stories are good to study in high school or college because it teaches us a lot of different topics such as culture, appearance, wealth gap, and something very important that is education”. I think it is really clever to bring up the fact these stories are importantes because many students who want to pursue their career in this path, this is like a previous to them. Thank you so much for your analysis “Literary Analysis Comparing Three Stories” . I am really looking forward to seeing what you will accomplish next.

  • When my sister Dee, Mama, and I lived together, I always felt ashamed that Dee saw me. My body was covered with burn scars on my arms and feet since the day that our old house burned. Dee always hated that

    • Dear Lenin
      I am fascinated with your short story, “Maggie’s hard life,” because related that the life of a girl that have scars on her skin. Its difficult to adapt and have confidence in herself. She always feel sad by her issue and feel different by her sister.
      One of the lines that stands out for me is,have noticed that,”Mama always paid more attention to dee than me. I was the black sheep of the family.” These lines represent the difference she look in her Mama about her sister. She related her feelings.
      Your short story “Maggie’s hard life,” helps me to understand the problem that faced some people with issues in their personality.
      Thanks for your short story. I look forward to seeing what you make next. I hope you post interesting texts like this one.

    • Eros replied 1 month ago

      Dear Lenin:
      I am very attracted to you story “Maggie’s hard life”, because of the choice that you made to describe a story like “ Everyday Use” that is already complicated but putting your point of view makes it such as understandable piece of writing that is analyzed in the best way to make it as clear as you could be able to put not just details of the story but to proof a piece of yourself as a writer in to an already established and developed almost a new story with the sense of the importance of family involvement. One of the most impacted pieces stated on your story that stands out to me is when you said, “I was like the black sheep of the family”. I think this line resemble how you got into the character’s mindset,because the way that you are able to describe what she felt happening to the character in a deeper way than what we could read shows how overwhelming her life was whole this creates a sense of satisfaction in the reader when a writer is able to make the deep of a description and characterization . Another quote that stands out for me is “ I always felt ashamed that Dee saw me”. I think this expresses the desire of the main character of been treated differently while fighting for her family to be together again like before. Your story reminds me of the original story with a more narrative tone because of the description almost letting the reader see how the character feels about how her family view her as. “ Everyday Use” express more in a narrative way.
      Thanks for your story. I look forward to seeing what you make next. What would bring me back to read any of your story is the appreciation to the description, narration and characterization in the story that is very much attached to the original version.

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