• Hi Prerna! Thank you so much for your feedback!

  • Hi Sloane! Thanks for commenting on my post and helping me continue my journey towards youth voices fame. It’s true that Lake wanted to bring back someone outside her family, but I don’t want to spoil much. I think it is a hard decision but it truly is her choice on who she wants to resurrect. Thanks again and have a good day. -laya

  • Hi David! I really enjoyed your post and think your topic is a very important thing that everyone should be more educated about. Your book sounds really interesting, and especially significant considering the times we are in now. In the second paragraph, where you talked about how the FBI doesn’t consider hate necessarily as a crime, was very…[Read more]

  • “With family on your side, there isn’t a battle you can’t lose”. It is more than fair to say that America is one of the most diverse countries one may come across. Each and every citizen has different view po

    • Hi Laya,
      I really liked your essay especially the really big words you used. I think your book ties well into the meaning of family and how it is an American creed which you do a good job of explaining. I also enjoyed your opinion on family being so important in one’s life and the ability to overcome obstacles within it.

    • Hi Laya!
      I really enjoyed reading your post. That book seems really interesting, and I’d love to read it sometime. I thought that you did a really good job connecting the book to the essential question. I think you brought up interesting points about morals and loyalty to your family as well. From your writing, I am assuming that Lake chose to bring back someone who wasn’t in her family, and that her family shamed her for this because they wanted her to bring back someone else. What do you think about this? Do you think she made the wrong decision or do you think it doesn’t matter because it’s her choice? Can’t wait to hear back from you!

      • Hi Sloane! Thanks for commenting on my post and helping me continue my journey towards youth voices fame. It’s true that Lake wanted to bring back someone outside her family, but I don’t want to spoil much. I think it is a hard decision but it truly is her choice on who she wants to resurrect. Thanks again and have a good day. -laya

        • Hi again Laya!
          You’re so welcome for helping you reach your goal of stardom. You truly deserve it with the intricate and complex analysis you wrote on the novel. It’s very considerate of you to not want to spoil the book. Hope you have a marvelous weekend.
          Best wishes,
          Sloane

    • Hi Laya, I love how you talked about family and family is important to us all and they makw who we are. I personally say that family is the most important thing to me and that it comes first before anything. Here is an article i think you might like https://www.beliefnet.com/love-family/family-values.aspx

    • Hi Laya! I agree with your opinion on people’s behavior affect by their parents and surroundings. Also you did a good job connecting your opinion to the book and your resources, especially the data and the quotation you used to explain your opinion and set the evidence. It is good for me to learn from you. Your post give me a lot new ideas about the family that I didn’t realized before. Thank you for your sharing, I really like it. And hope you enjoy your weekend!

    • Hi Laya,
      I agree with you. I believe that family is a special existence for us, and it will affect us a lot. The family can also provide us with a warm harbor. You have well linked your comments to books and resources and provided a lot of convincing evidence.
      Here is an article I think you might like https://www.theodysseyonline.com/the-true-meaning-of-family

    • Laya,
      Your essay does a great job of depicting how complex families are. There is something that bonds us together no matter how many struggles we may have to face. I think your book also brought up an important issue. Who’s needs come first: your own or that of the greater good? I wonder who you would have brought back to life given the chance! I hope to see more writings from you as I like the way you explore multiple venues of a topic.

    • Hi Laya,
      I like your post because it explains the true meaning of the love we have for our family. The “This is Not The End” book you reference sounds interesting and I may want to read it. The way you describe what you learn helps me see what I learned. Something sad is that we have to experience losing everything to truly understand our love we have for others. I think we should already have a good feel of how we feel towards those closest towards us. Here is a link to more meaning of family https://www.theodysseyonline.com/the-true-meaning-of-family We go through ups and downs with our families but the way we feel for them should stay positive.
      -Audrey

    • Hi Laya, your post was great and I agree I believe that family is everything. Family is always going to stick next to your side through thick and thin. Also family plays a huge role on the development of a kids life, such as single parent kids has a higher risk of getting into drugs or gangs. Here is a like related to your topic. https://www.pewsocialtrends.org/2015/12/17/1-the-american-family-today/

    • Yanna replied 1 month ago

      Hi Laya,
      I agree with your opinion. Family is important to each of us. The family environment and education also have a certain impact on our development. Just as the survey shows, children of single-parent families are more likely to commit crimes. The book “This is not the end” you referenced is also very interesting. Your post made me understand the importance of family to us. Thank you for sharing.
      This link might interest you

      How Do You Define Family? The True Meaning of Family

  • Hi Prerna!
    I really enjoyed reading your paper, it had a focused claim and great evidence. I completely agree with your views on this topic that there is inequality and if we want to progress in life we must work for it. I think the way you phrased this essay made it that much more compelling and made me understand what you were trying to say.…[Read more]

  • There is no certain, definitive answer to the question that we ask ourselves day to day. What truly defines an American? Everyone has a different story and their own beliefs. The beauty of living in this country

  • Hi Wesley,
    I actually never really thought about how that could affect not only us but the performer and also everyone around us. I agree that when you pay money to go see a concert, you should live in the moment and experience it firsthand. I, however, understand why someone would want to take a video or picture at a concert in attempt to keep…[Read more]

  • Hi Maggie,
    I really agree with your stance on the amount of stress school puts on students. I think you covered some really compelling points and made a really great argument. Stress is something every highschooler is expected to endure, but an understanding teacher and support system can really mean the world. As time goes on, hopefully students…[Read more]

  • Hi Calaia,
    I love your poem, I think it has a meaning that needs to be talked about a lot more. Gun violence is so important and is such a huge issue that scares and puts people in danger everyday. Just by spreading the word, you can save lots of lives. I completely agree with you views, it is such a sad reality we live in and hopefully we can do…[Read more]

  • Hi Alani!
    I really enjoyed reading your post. In my lit class we are actually studying American Creed and the American Dream so I thought it was super interesting to hear your opinion about it. I agree with your views on the topic that Americans should be given equal opportunities. I also just finished reading “The Absolutely True Diary of a…[Read more]

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