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Laya commented on the post, A Never-Ending Search
Sup Brian. I absolutely loved reading this piece. Your descriptive words and fluent storyline make the story come to life. I could thoroughly imagine exactly what you were saying, and felt as if I was watching the actual TV show! I will never forget this!!!!
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Laya wrote a new post
You
are forgetting
how to sympathize
because your egotistical
mindset can get in the way of
realizing that this world which seems straight
forward is in reality more like a kind of uhhhh wave.
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The poem shows how people can get stuck in a traditional, “straight” type of mindset, and how in reality people are not that way, being a “wave.” I knew it would be confusing and thats why I liked it, because it makes you question.
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This poem is very different from others. I like it because it leaves reader thinking.
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If im being honest I dont really understand what this poem is about but I can see you put a lot of thought into it