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    Laya commented on the post, Brother

    The poem shows how people can get stuck in a traditional, “straight” type of mindset, and how in reality people are not that way, being a “wave.” I knew it would be confusing and thats why I liked it, because it makes you question.

  • Sup Brian. I absolutely loved reading this piece. Your descriptive words and fluent storyline make the story come to life. I could thoroughly imagine exactly what you were saying, and felt as if I was watching the actual TV show! I will never forget this!!!!

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    You

    are forgetting

    how to sympathize

    because your egotistical

    mindset can get in the way of

    realizing that this world which seems straight

    forward is in reality more like a kind of uhhhh wave.

    Brother

    You are forgetting how to sympathize because your egotistical mindset can get in the way of realizing that this world which seems straight forward is in reality more like a kind of uhhhh wave. ISO Adoff

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    • If im being honest I dont really understand what this poem is about but I can see you put a lot of thought into it

      • The poem shows how people can get stuck in a traditional, “straight” type of mindset, and how in reality people are not that way, being a “wave.” I knew it would be confusing and thats why I liked it, because it makes you question.

    • This poem is very different from others. I like it because it leaves reader thinking.

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