Hi, Jillian!

I notice that you replace “dirt” in the first draft with “heart” in the second draft: “In the heart of Prospect Park”. So interesting!. I like both options. For me, the image of “dirt” brought to mind ground that was unadorned with grass. That visualization made me wonder if dirt symbolized the feelings you had from being…[Read more]

Steve! You’ve revised your bio so much over the course of the weeks! Your tone is generous and reflective, and you share your serious interests and preferences.

I loved reading what you came up with, and following your version history as you warmed up to the occasion of introducing yourself.

Kiran