• Kimberli wrote a new post, Back to When 11 months ago

    Back to when…
    I was 7…
    To when the smell of the burning wood
    To the sticky half burned marshmallows
    To the itchy mosquito bites
    To the sun smiling down at me
    To sweaty me smiling back
    To the peaceful l

    • Kimberli, This is such an interesting piece of prose I had to read it many times to fully piece together the information that you give. I love the repetitiveness of the piece and how detailed you made each line. Although it is a small piece of writing it tells a much bigger story that is quite interesting. My favorite line was when you said “To the peaceful lake that was a mirror of our shining smiles” I thought that this showed a lot of detail and inclusion in other things other than just the writing.

    • Dear Kimberli:

      I am excited by your poem, “Back to when…,” because It’s very nice what you write. I like how you talk about burned marshmallows.

      One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is: ”To the peaceful lake that was a mirror of our shining smiles.” I think this is beautiful because you lived a very happy and carefree life.
      Thanks for your writing. I look forward to seeing what you write next, because I would like to see what you write about how you live now.

      Samantha.

  • Kimberli posted an update 11 months ago

    Back to when…
    To when I was 7
    To when the smell of the burning wood
    To the sticky half burned marshmallows
    To the itchy mosquito bites
    To the sun smiling down at me
    To sweaty me smiling back
    To the peaceful lake that was a mirror of our shining smiles
    To all the birthdays celebrated
    To all the wishes made
    To the secrets whispered in the d…[Read more]

  • Kimberli became a registered member 11 months, 1 week ago