The writing effectively highlights the writer’s belief in the value of all lives and the need for fair treatment regardless of race. It addresses the issue of police brutality and acknowledges the unjust treatment of people of color. The inclusion of personal reflections, such as feeling sympathy for Starr’s friend but still justifying police…Read More

I found this piece relatable due to my background in an area plagued by incarceration issues. The justice system often fails us, yet demands our trust, leading to division. Education and prevention are crucial. I think the  image of the child with the ball connected very well with your writing piece. Mass incarceration, particularly of African…Read More

I love the image you created and I think it connects to your writing piece perfectly. I think you did a good job conveying the message that Lisa Carter’s speech to the Human Rights Commission effectively emphasizes the urgency of the issue and the collective responsibility to address it. Her call for compassion and collaboration resonates well,…Read More

I like the cover you chose for your writing piece. Your essay effectively illuminates the connection between Atlanta’s urban development and its historical legacy of segregation. The clarity of your analysis contributes to a cohesive and engaging exploration of the topic. Your critical evaluation of narratives concerning empowerment, displacement,…Read More

For starters I really like the image attached to your writing. It is very creative and I think it really sets the tone of your writing. I think you did a really good job with your writing too.Your analysis effectively delves into Kevin Kruse’s “The Traffic Jam,” uncovering layers of urban development, historical injustices, and institutional…Read More