• Kelly commented on the post, You can do it! 1 week, 5 days ago

    Dear Mady,

    Thank you for reading my poem! i’m glad you were able to relate to it and understand it claim. I would really like to read your poem too and give you some feedback. Could you send me a link? Thank you!

    Kelly

  • Kelly wrote a new post, You can do it! 1 month ago

    The first day of school,              It’s scary, different, intimidating.                                But you’ll get through it.                                              

    • Dear Kelly:
      I’m amazed by your poem “You can do it!” because I can relate to it. It’s hard for me to get up in the morning. I hate getting up.

    • Dear Kelly:

      I am very impressed by your poem “you can do it” because of how realistic it its to school on the first day.

    • i am very impressed by the way you did your poem .

    • Dear Kelly

      I really enjoyed your poem!

      One line that stands out to me is, “easy, hard, go back to bed” I relate to this a lot because I always struggle with waking up in the morning.

      I also liked how the whole poem was very encouraging. Sometimes school is really difficult, but you’re right, we can do it!

      Thanks for your poem. I look forward to seeing what you make next.

    • I really love your “You can do it” poem. I thought the form of the poem was exceptional and super spontaneous of the style of your poem. I see that this poem could resemble people’s everyday struggles, and I thought that it hits me close to home. So, thank you for this great poem! Keep up the good work!

    • Dear Kelly, I enjoyed your poem quiete a bit and enjoyed how inspirational it is. It really tells you to hop back on the horse if you have fallen off. Horses are so tall! Can you imagine how big a horse would be if it was twice as big as it currently is?! That would be a very large horse. Gargantuan. Wow
      Sincerely, Cam

    • Dear Mady,

      Thank you for reading my poem! i’m glad you were able to relate to it and understand it claim. I would really like to read your poem too and give you some feedback. Could you send me a link? Thank you!

      Kelly

  • Kelly wrote a new post, Apology 1 month ago

    I was broken                                                                                   And it hurtIt was my faultI am sorryI was happyI was angryI was unforgivableI am sorry When you wanted to do som

    • Hey Kelly, I like your poem it’s really nice. I feel like this poem is very personal to you, was it something you wrote for yourself? Your line “to my greatest enemy, myself and only me” it seems as if you have an internal battle with yourself, and knowing that you were confident enough to expose this to the world and I applaud you for it.

    • Dear Kelly,
      I really like how you connected this to how you would feel if you were not forgiven from what you have done. Also, you show lots of emotions and how it would be better if you were forgiven instead of just letting it go. This shows that you really thought about this before you wrote this because it really shows it in your writing. “When you wanted to do something new it was me who stopped you” this is a really strong piece of writing because it shows how you admit what you have done and that you realize that it was wrong and that it affected that other person. Overall this was one good piece of poetry keep it up!

    • Dear Kelly, I really like your poem it really makes me feel connected because in my position I’m alway saying “sorry” to people or just to myself and when people hurt me or say something to be a never received a sorry back. It actually shows your emotions and how you feeling and it really nice that you are sharing your feelings on your poem. A line that stood out to me “For I can only forgive myself, if you forgive me, It’s better to apologize than to leave it be” because it shows the person that you are that tries to fix things out and actually admitting the things you sorry and forgiving others so you could feel better yourself.

  • Kelly commented on the post, Love Story 4 months, 2 weeks ago

    Dear Kimberly,

    Thank you so much for sharing your poetry. A line that stood out to me was “I don’t get the feeling I’m clueless.” I really like the transition from not knowing anything about love and feeling, then not being able to leave once it was felt. I felt that it was beautiful and truthful.

    A second line that was powerful was “I give the…[Read more]

  • Dear Leslie.

    Thank you so much for sharing your poetry. A line that stood out to me was “Not every girl is the same” because many people act like they can treat females the same, sometimes good,sometimes bad.
    A second line that was powerful was “You will soon find your power” because so many girls around the world aren’t in control of there own…[Read more]

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