• I just watched two videos about stress called “How stress can make you sick” and “ How stress affects the brain”. Here’s what I understand about stress now. Being sick can affect you also when you are tired, an

  • KeJahn commented on the post, Drug vs Teens 1 month, 4 weeks ago

    Dear Hugo :
    I am intrigued by your post, “drugs vs teens,” because It gets right to the point and is telling about a problem that most kids face going to high school. And it shows how easy it is to get drugs for youth which tends to them messing up in school.
    One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is: “These statistics show that marij…[Read more]

  • Dear Jimmy :
    I am intrigued with your post, “drug usage commited by teens,” because it has good evidence on your topic. The information you have really supports the message that you are trying to tell the readers about drug usage.
    One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is: “This group of others can be bullying the inferior group, accel…[Read more]

  • Dear Youth Voices Community,

    My name is KeJahn Banks,attend Fremont High school, and I’m a basketball player.

    I feel like the research I’ve done in my class has really enhanced my knowledge on my topic of p

    • The research is very well done, but I would add more details about cases of this. But it is very good.

    • I think that this police force is very disrespectul and brutal about there behavior just because of the skin of another human being. I also think that this study and research was very useful and accurate.

    • I think that this was a good article. I really and thourghouly felt passion when I read the piece. What is would like to see, is more analysis and relate it back to your life. Overall good job and keep editing.

    • I think is a good start to what I assume will be an essay revolving around that thesis. I think that you are going to be able to find more than enough evidence on the subject to help defend that thesis. I think a really good step to make in this essay would to talk about history and what progress has or hasn’t been made. I would bring in Supreme Court cases on the matter to make your argument that much better. This is a great topic that needs to be shared with everyone. Good job!

    • I really appreciate the fact that you decided to make a thesis statement on this. It’d be a really cool idea if you added different cases in which African American people have been a victim to police brutality for example Michael Brown, Eric Garner, Trayvon Martin, Dontre Hamilton, and the protests they do to try to reduce the police brutality going on.

    • I really admire that you decided to do your thesis on something that is mostly put on the back burner. Being a black female. I do think police brutality is something to be addressed, especially for the sake of young black men. Who are sometimes targeted without doing anything. If you continue on with this topic definitely give some background on police brutality in the black community and lead up to currently. It would be super cool to read this in the future.

    • You should also research black crime rates. If black people commit more crime; it only makes sense why people would racial profile them more than say asians, as the asian crime rate is significantly lower than the black. In other words, if a disproportionate amount of people will commit crime, it is unsurprising that a stereotype that black people commit crime exist.

  • Dear,Markie :
    I am intrigued by your post because it had a lot of good points on athletes and school “What would happen if we didn’t have sports” what i liked about it was the points to where you explained how it made athletes feel overwhelmed with playing a sport and doing work in school.
    One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is: “Not…[Read more]

  • Dear Ariel

    I am very interested by your letter , “Institutional Racism” because it’s something I can connect too. Many people in my area always experience this racism because where i’m from most are african american people.

    One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is: “A study released to 2012, by University of Washington showed that pedi…[Read more]

  • Dear Joey

    I love this article” legalize mary jane” because the article is showing a very good cause to make marijuana legal. It explained how it can help young kids to stop having seizures.

    One sentence that you wrote that suprised me was “Her doctor has suggested that medical marijuana could help lessen, or even nearly eliminate, her seizu…[Read more]

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