@keeba-polius
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Keeba changed their profile picture 4 days, 14 hours ago
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Keeba commented on the post, brooklyn bridge 1 week, 3 days ago
Dear, Aliyabanu I like that you took such a great well known bridge/ artifact and had a story line behind it. it was really interesting that you used imagery, because when I look at the picture I wouldn’t have guessed what they were saying.
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Keeba commented on the post, Megan’s My Beautiful Neighborhood 1 week, 3 days ago
Dear Megan,I like the way you use imagery to give me a clear whiff of how the subway near you live. Its funny how you told the truth put still was able to capture the feeling. Judging by the smells you described im sure you hate it, as do I. I liked in line 3 when you said ” the platform is too high” do you have any suggestions for MTA? Possibly…[Read more]
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Keeba commented on the post, Sudden Movement 1 week, 4 days ago
Dear Hatou,
I really admire your bio, because it captives your life and beliefs very well. You clearly stated how you feel about the issues in Africa of teen pregnancy, and early marriage. I’m happy that you bought underlying issues to light. I wanted to know even more about you, seeing that you have experienced so much that…[Read more] -
Keeba commented on the post, Mental Illness in the Homeless Population 2 weeks, 3 days ago
Dear Sera,
As a witness I can definitely tell that we usually walk pass homeless people thinking that they are Crazy not knowing that they actually have mental diseases. This is actually a topic that most people don’t get to bring to awareness. This is something that the government doesn’t address. Do you think is because they…[Read more] -
Keeba commented on the post, Cha-ri-ssa! 2 weeks, 3 days ago
Hi Charissa,
I like that you seem very persistant seeing that you have moved back and fourth from PA and NY. transitioning schools might have been hard for you. Tell us more about that experience. How are you liking your new school so far? -
Keeba wrote a new post, I am Me 2 weeks, 3 days ago
I am Keeba. I will speak up if i don’t like the way im being treated or if i don’t agree with what someone says. So more on the sassy side. I am really open to trying new things, and even meeting new peop
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Great poem!!
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Dear Keeba:
I am amazed by your post “ I am “, because you explain how you really are and I Love the way you talk about yourself.
One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is “I am really open to trying new things, and even meeting new people.”Because is important experiment to learn.
Thanks for your writing. I look forward to seeing what you write next because I would like to know more about how you do to be sure of you.
Sofia
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I liked your post. I think that it is great that you are confident and not afraid to stand up for yourself.
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Hi Keeba! You sound like a wonderful person and someone who is really open and honest about who they are. Your opening sentence where you talk about speaking up is so powerful and I wish more people could feel that way about themselves. Keep dancing and being who you are. Have a wonderful day.
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I really enjoyed reading your bio , it was didn’t start with a name was very specific just me ,i like how when you first started if i didn’t know how you were as a person i would’ve guessed based on how you presented not to accept any less than deserve or mistreatment , you believe in speaking up for yourself morals and what you stand for without confrontation , i know a lot and enough at the same time you were detailed into what you enjoy doing ,and expressed what you love about the things you do and how you interact and expect conversations to go in order for great communication.
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Keeba commented on the post, Broken Girl 3 weeks, 5 days ago
Dear Emily,
I really admire the fact that you clearly captivated what it really means to be broken or felt like your all alone.One sentence that stands out to me is the line where you say ” She doesn’t remember the last time someone said “I love you” and really meant it” . This makes me cherish every moment i have with those I love and also…[Read more]
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Keeba commented on the post, The Law Is Unjust 1 month ago
You did a great job on the art aspect of the poem, it was very creative. Type out your poem so we can read it!
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Keeba commented on the post, Shut Up 1 month ago
Dear Elijah,
I am beyond shocked that you choose to present such a serious topic like this. Especially seeing that your in Middle School. I like that you addressed the President quote on quote for every word. -
Keeba wrote a new post, A memory of a memory 1 month ago
I remember waking up early in the morningI remember thinking will that plane go down?I remember when it finally took off.I remember that amazing adrenaline rush.From the soul of my feet to the crown of my headI
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Keeba wrote a new post, Behind The Scenes 1 month ago
I am from curry powder and hot peppers and dutch pots,From mangos and coconuts I am from the closet we used to play hide and seek in I am from the sprinklers Lincoln Terrace park Whose large landscape I
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Keeba wrote a new post, WHY? 1 month ago
You walk into the double doorsPut your hand onto the bible You swear in hopes to tell the truth Silently weeping for justice to be servedYour heart pounds as a possibly,Bias, Sexist, Racist, person Judges
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Keeba became a registered member 2 months, 2 weeks ago
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