• Estimada Heymi.

    Estoy muy impresionada de como escribiste tu poema ya que te expresas muy bien y tambien se puede entender muy bien lo que quisiste transmitir al escribir tu poema.

    Una oración que escribiste que me llama la atención es “When I came to New York I did not know that all people in school would need to speak English in ord…[Read more]

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  • I am made of yellow and orange house On a quiet street in La Troncal, EcuadorLiving with my grandmother, my sister, my brother, and my momlistening to Sam Smith songsMy room is very big and colorful My dad a

    • Grant replied 4 weeks ago

      Dear Allison:
      I am impressed with your poem “My Life in La Troncal, Ecuador,” because it expresses what you are made of very well. Reading about your life in Ecuador was very interesting to me.

      One sentence that stands out to me is: “I am made of a girl playing on the large rocks next to the blue ocean.” I think this is excellent because it creates a picture in my mind of the setting you grew up in.

      Another sentence that I enjoyed was: “I always wait for the 53rd street train R to arrive.” I think this is important because it brings another aspect to your poem.

      Your poem reminds me of something that happened to me. One time I went on a vacation to California. The setting in your story reminded me of that in California. With the big blue ocean near the gigantic rocks, both places are similar in a way.

      Thanks for your writing. I look forward to seeing what you write next because I really enjoyed this piece. Your descriptions were very compelling and I could imagine your thoughts.

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