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Dear Dr. Phillip Williamson, My team and I are choosing to write to you because in your article “Climeworks Capturing CO2 , from Air” you’re taking the Carbon Dioxide out the air and filtering it to CO2 gas an
Read MoreDear Dr. Phillip Williamson, My team and I are choosing to write to you because in your article “Climeworks Capturing CO2 , from Air” you’re taking the Carbon Dioxide out the air and filtering it to CO2 gas and...
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One line that stood out to me is the line that said ” I will rise up for the boy who wants to be a girl. I think this line shows a lot of bravery because coming out as being gay is extremly inflexible just because some people are ashamed or, they’re scared that someone is going to judge them. To be a voice for someone who is not strong enough o…Read More
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Kanika commented on the post, Gentrification is a "Slap In The Face"
Dear Mr. Ogaz
I love that you think my argument for keeping gentrification out of Oakland is very compelling because i’m only in the 9th grade and to get such a delicate eye to read and even notice my blog/work is very beholden. So I thank you for taking your time out and reading and commenting on my blog and to answer your question of what other…Read More
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Kanika commented on the post, Gentrification is a "Slap In The Face"
Hey Calvin, Thank you so much for reading my blog. The part of your comment that stood out to me was when you said that u agree with my point about the single parents because I truly believe that this is a big deal for the Oakland community. To answer your question about the New community members are increasing the stereotypes on the original…Read More
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Dr. Williamson knows about climate change. There is no need to explain what it is and it’s repercussions to him. If I were him, I would be wondering who exactly is part of your team and how you guys are actively working to reduce the severity of climate change. Sure, you may be making posters and presenting to middle schoolers, but what are you going to present and how. He also knows what his own writing is so there is no need to summarize it. Cut to the chase and explain why you are writing to him. Is it for funding to buy supplies or is it to have support from a scientist? If nothing else, I would suggest proof reading because there are a lot of errors that can be easily fixed.