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    I love the pictures, Wendy, very nice, really shows your love for Mexico, keep up the good work, can’t wait for your next post!

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    they hide their softnesswith hard outer shellswaiting to be bittenwaiting to be smelledtheir form changed frombulbous to greasy thinall thats left oversalt licked awayby hungry tongues

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    they hide their softnesswith hard outer shellswaiting to be bittenwaiting to be smelledtheir form changed frombulbous to greasy thinall thats left oversalt licked awayby hungry tongues

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    • wow kalina i like this poem very much because it makes me laugh, but it also sounds like it can be related or connected to different things. And i like you draw readers in with the photo and the title, so BE HAPPY it is a very good poem.

    • Hi Kalina,
      I really like your poem and how you described the fries. I like how you used the fries as if they had feelings, for example by saying that they ‘hide’ and are ‘waiting’. This adds an extra touch of excitement to your peom. I also liked how you described the tongues as being hungry. Really great job!

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    I remember drawing on the terrace steps. I remember spending summers. I remember biking to the town pool with my sister. I remember eating pasta on the back porch at night and making smores around the fire pit.

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    I remember drawing on the terrace steps. I remember spending summers. I remember biking to the town pool with my sister. I remember eating pasta on the back porch at night and making smores around the fire pit....

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