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Kalina commented on the post, Who’s Wendy Rivera? 5 days, 12 hours ago
Dear Wendy
I am impressed with your BIO, “Who’s Wendy Rivera” because I loved the determination and confidence you displayed in it.
One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is: “ am a person who will push myself even more no matter how hard it can get.” I think this is great because it shows how determined you are to overcome any challen…[Read more] -
Kalina commented on the post, Pictures of Mexico 2 weeks, 3 days ago
I love the pictures, Wendy, very nice, really shows your love for Mexico, keep up the good work, can’t wait for your next post!
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Kalina commented on the post, A Never-Ending Search 3 weeks, 5 days ago
good, fun, and fresh!
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Kalina wrote a new post, Fries 3 weeks, 5 days ago
they hide their softnesswith hard outer shellswaiting to be bittenwaiting to be smelledtheir form changed frombulbous to greasy thinall thats left oversalt licked awayby hungry tongues
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wow kalina i like this poem very much because it makes me laugh, but it also sounds like it can be related or connected to different things. And i like you draw readers in with the photo and the title, so BE HAPPY it is a very good poem.
Hi Kalina,
I really like your poem and how you described the fries. I like how you used the fries as if they had feelings, for example by saying that they ‘hide’ and are ‘waiting’. This adds an extra touch of excitement to your peom. I also liked how you described the tongues as being hungry. Really great job!