• Dear Braden

    I am very excited by your post “Endangered Species In China,” because I feel like many of your ideas about how endangered species in China line up very closely with mine and I feel that in the future your work will get even better and better. One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is: “Through this article I’ve learned that it…[Read more]

  • In our generation the extinction rate of species has rapidly gone up and “Every hour, 3 species disappear. Every day up to 150 species are lost. ” The illegal Chinese trade of endangered species is one reason o

    • Dear justin:

      I am excited by your post , “Endangered species in China ,” because I too care about this topic. I agree that it should be brought to attention and now.

      One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is: “ This would show how much the Chinese government is actually clamping down on these criminals and whether all those bills and legislations are just for public appeal.” I think this is well written because it shows what you learned by doing your research. You learned how messed up the Chinese government is when it comes to endangered species.

      Another sentence that I saw was, “ I think our solution is better than most others because mainly ours has it so the average joe can participate very easily compared to like trying to get legislation to pass a new law or going into that dangerous kind of market and capture it all on camera.” This stood out for me because it shows your solution to this issue that you are talking about.

      I do agree with you that this issue needs to be brought to attention. One reason I say this is because thousands of species are dying and humans can help stop it. Another reason I agree is because, like you said, species are dying at 1000 times the rate of “natural.”

      Have you seen this video? I thought you might be interested in this because of the brutal evidence for the killing of sharks for fins.

      Thanks for your writing. I look forward to seeing your next blog due to your captivating writing. Well said blog.

      -Braden

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