• Hi Edwin! Thank you for taking time to read and comment on my post. I really appreciate your feedback and I will definitely listen to it. Again, thank you for reading and responding to my poem. I hope I can see some of your work.

    – Julian | 8th Grade | King Middle School

  • Hi Kalani! Thank you for reading and commenting on my poem. You mentioned that your class did something similar. Did you post that on Youth Voices? Thank you for all of the compliments! I would love to see some of your work.

    – Julian | 8th Grade | King Middle School

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    • Dear Julian,

      I like how you used a speech from an activist like MLK JR. and use the I HAVE A DREAM speech to transform it into a poem that is based on the speech by using some key words and show a message to people around the society and community. You should improve more so that when you do your own poetry and speeches, you can use your skills as a thinker and a poet to have a very inspiring piece of writing to remember. Thank you for your time and have a great day!

      Edwin M.

      • Hi Edwin! Thank you for taking time to read and comment on my post. I really appreciate your feedback and I will definitely listen to it. Again, thank you for reading and responding to my poem. I hope I can see some of your work.

        – Julian | 8th Grade | King Middle School

    • Hi Kalani! Thank you for reading and commenting on my poem. You mentioned that your class did something similar. Did you post that on Youth Voices? Thank you for all of the compliments! I would love to see some of your work.

      – Julian | 8th Grade | King Middle School

  • Dear Victor,

    Thank you so much for sharing your poem, “Love is Powerful” on Youth Voices. The lines “love is beautiful” and “love can be ugly” stand out to me because they are such a strong way to start out your poem, and they give you a lot to think about. I also like how much emotion this poem brings. I feel like you really thought about h…[Read more]

  • Julian commented on the post, HURT 4 months, 1 week ago

    Dear Jocelyn,

    Thank you so much for sharing your poem, “HURT” on Youth Voices. The meaning behind the poem is super strong, and you did an excellent job with your writing. Your poem reminds me of the book/movie, “The Hate U Give” because the character Khalil gets killed even though he was completely innocent, just like your uncle. Thank you so…[Read more]