Yes Franqui Perz, Trump can take away DACA because it was a presidential demand.

Thank you Jessica for the critical feedback that you gave us, it really does help. Most importantly, what we are trying to do is to bring awareness on how DACA is important to hispanic people but not only hispanic folks, many other ethnicities that are not recognized by the media. We are painting a mural that states, “Migration is beautiful” in…[Read more]

Great job on continuing to write about a topic that should be really brought up. Thank you a lot for sharing your point of view

Very great job on the structure of your opinion. I really like how you brought up the topic of animal abuse. It makes it very strong.

Your story is very interesting Angie! I love how your name was chosen by your mother instead of your father. The story you decided to tell was structured in a proper way. Especially when you recognised how much a name matters to a person.

Leslie, this is the best article I have been reading so far! I highly agree on the two topics that matter the most, Immigration and Education. I love how every paragraph is connected to one another making your reasoning very strong. You talked about two heavy topics that are usually sensitive, but you made it very clear on what you’re purpose is.

Wow! That was such of an description of how we can fight against the violence in Oakland. Specifically on how you described on how their are multiple perspectives of outsiders thinking about Oakland. It is really important to include multiple voices because it lets the reader better comprehend your point. Also, you are tackling with a subject that…[Read more]

This is such of an amazing and interesting article. I just love how firm you are and aware of what it trully means to actually be a “good person”. I completely agree with you in the part where you, Cheryl, confirmed, “In my opinion there’s no one way this can be an accurate definition.” Building off of this part, a lot of people define a good p…[Read more]

I strongly agree onto the fact that stress could be a big problem into your life. But, it is important to manage it, which you clearly bring up. I would like for you to explore further onto this idea by being social or going out to places to release the stress. I have tried yoga in 6th grade which was fun trying and it definitely does help to get…[Read more]