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You kinda show that you understand but these arent paragraphs and your sentences are cut off.

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I remember… View Comment
  • @joshuaw
  • March 25, 2019

Dear, zariya i am astonished by your poem, “I remember...” because it describes exactly how you’ve grown into the person you are today. You’ve expressed how your personality and creativity is your way out. One line that stood out to me is “I remember losing myself, now i remember...

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This My StoRY So fAr View Comment
  • @joshuaw
  • March 25, 2019

Dear Terren, I am astonished by your post, "This My StoRY So fAr" because it describes exactly how you've grown into the person you are today. You've expressed how basketball is your way out. One line that stood out to me is "Honestly, there’s no point of yelling when...

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