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  • Josh commented on the post, Aren't We All The Same

    I like the themes of the poem and how clear it is that this topic really means something to you.

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    Final Goodbye.

    Grandma, I’m sorry, I couldn’t spend more time with you before you had to go You were always there for me You helped me figure out who I want to be Grandma, you’re trying to tell me something I know. Doctor comes in,...

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    • This is sad. It brought tears into my eyeballs. Thank you for this moving piece. – Autumn

    • This was very sad and emotional. I can kind of relate in the same way with how my grandad died from cancer. This is a very good piece of poetry and it was really enjoyable to read.

    • I really appreciated this piece. This was very personal for me because I lost my grandpa to cancer a little over a month ago. You perfectly described how I felt and still do.

    • I really enjoyed the poem. You were so vulnerable in the poem, and the emotion definitely came across. It’s easy to relate this to my own life. It was very moving, thank you for sharing.

    • good rhyme scheme

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