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  • Josh11James
Should college be free? View Comment
  • @Josh11James
  • March 26, 2021

I think this topic is very interesting and very much so relevant. With this being a problem in our generation of college being too expensive I think this is something that needs to be talked about. I think you did a good job on presenting fact and numbers and...

Utahs Struggle with Air Quality View Comment
  • @Josh11James
  • March 26, 2021

I really like this article and the problem is very significant. I think that this problem is very important and not really talked about in our state. I think that showing the damaging effects of this problem can be very impactful and presenting solutions and even past proposed solutions...

Maggie, I really like your article and like the fact that you are shedding light on to this problem. I think your article is very well composed with really good information backing it. I think including different numbers can show the significance and power of your argument.

Edwin, this article is really interesting and informative. The main take I got was how different it is for some people in different countries. I think showing the experiences of others, especially in other countries is really important to show how some lucky some of us are.

This is a really important topic. I think the intro with Colin Kaepernick is really important to bring into light because how we sort of forgot about it in a way. I think mentioning high school sports and college sports would also be interesting.

I agree with you. With vaping being such a recent thing that has popped up, I think it is important to know that we don't know much about it. I think this article https://www.nationalreview.com/corner/major-anti-vaping-scientific-study-retracted/ helps give good information about the research being put into vaping and things. You then...

What Does It Mean To Be American View Comment
  • @Josh11James
  • October 20, 2020

I think this is a very well written article on a topic that is very important in today's time. For me, I am not American, in fact I am an immigrant from the U.K and the first part of your article where you included your mother got me really...

I agree with your argument Miles. I think you started your argument very strongly using numbers and facts. As we learned in class this is the use of pathos and even logos appealing to emotions and using numbers and facts. I think a big key part your article is...

When photos lie… View Comment
  • @Josh11James
  • October 13, 2020

I really liked this article. I think in today's world this topic is very relevant and you did a good job picking a relevant topic Alondra. There were two things I specifically liked. The first was the example of the Russian immigrant and her child. This shows how fake...

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