I think this topic is very interesting and very much so relevant. With this being a problem in our generation of college being too expensive I think this is something that needs to be talked about. I think you did a good job on presenting fact and numbers and explaining them.

I really like this article and the problem is very significant. I think that this problem is very important and not really talked about in our state. I think that showing the damaging effects of this problem can be very impactful and presenting solutions and even past proposed solutions and why they have not worked.

Maggie,
I really like your article and like the fact that you are shedding light on to this problem. I think your article is very well composed with really good information backing it. I think including different numbers can show the significance and power of your argument.