• I have to disagree with you bceause you need to have some evidence about you not believing in pollution. If your going disagree with us, support it with facts. Pollution is harming our planet, have you seen cities in China and a lot of middle eastern countries, pollution is making their everyday worst. People in China have to wear masks to not be…[Read more]

  • Im glad that some people agree with me and my partner, we have put solutions so that people get to think of what to act on. People get to choose what they are going to do, We are trying to wake them up with facts. We don’t want people to ignore this, people should actually care about the planet they are living in. Thanks for you’re feedback Joe.

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    Dear Life on Planet Earth,

    We are writing here today to tell Everybody that our Earth is coming to an end, and with it, life on Planet Earth. What will cause this end to life, people may be wondering.

    • Hello everyone.

      My name is Angel Rodriguez and I am a student at Fremont High School here in Oakland. I just read your project blog post and I have some feedback.
      One thing I liked about what you wrote was how you are really trying to stop this not by writting an artical but by making people more awake of what they have been doing.

      Something I have a question about is how can more people be more awake of this?

      Thank you for sharing your project!
      Angel

      • Dear Angel,

        Thank you for your comment, we really appreciate it.

        One way that more people can be awake of this situation is by gaining knowledge and information about pollution and the different types of pollution. Than, they will be able to learn about how to make small choices that will stop people from causing more pollution.

        Again, thank you for your comment!

        Brandom

    • My name is Terrill Lenoir and I am a student at Fremont High School here in Oakland. I just read your project blog post and I have some feedback.
      One thing I liked about what you wrote was when they said ” the earth plant earth is coming to a end soon and how its going to in is going to be caused by pollution. Its very thoughtful but not persuasive to be i don’t believe it.

      • I have to disagree with you bceause you need to have some evidence about you not believing in pollution. If your going disagree with us, support it with facts. Pollution is harming our planet, have you seen cities in China and a lot of middle eastern countries, pollution is making their everyday worst. People in China have to wear masks to not be inhailing the toxic gases in the air. I would like for you to reply to this and support you’re belief with some evidence. Thanks for the feedback though.

    • Im glad that some people agree with me and my partner, we have put solutions so that people get to think of what to act on. People get to choose what they are going to do, We are trying to wake them up with facts. We don’t want people to ignore this, people should actually care about the planet they are living in. Thanks for you’re feedback Joe.

    • My name is Flavio Ayon and i’m a student at Unity High in Oakland. I just finished reading your blog post and all I pretty much would like to say is that I agree with all your information including the solutions to the environment and how to improve it. The only question I have is, is there a type of program that brings people to help with global pollution that everyone has access to?

    • Hello Jose, I liked how you explained all the bad consequences that come with pollution and briefly break down all the little things that happen to us humans, the environment and the other living organisms. But my question is that do you think in your own opinion as of how pollution is right now do you think it will get worse or if it is going to become more sanitary for us?

  • well thanks for commenting on my work dorlin, i showed my idetities to see how people would react to it and so that people can see the real me. Im not from Mexico im from oakland, my parents where born in Mexico. My mom in Michoacan and dad in Tlaxcala by puebla. BUt thanks again, I would love to comment on your work.

  • Based on research and interviews, Gentrification is a big topic in Oakland but there are both positives and negatives to the change.

     

    Positives of Gentrification

     

    What good things has gentrification b

  • Passage to Humanity

     

    By Jose Tello

     

    For my modern interpretation of Romeo and Juliet I decided to instead talk about Oakland’s violence, racial oppression and the cause of that is Gentrification. Gen

  • Jose commented on the post, MY STORY 2 years ago

    This is great work I really like this, but I gotta ask why do you like donkey kong a lot? You say it makes you a strong person which is good if you think that and if it helps you just keep believing it. It seems like you did good in this assignment, it looks like donkey kong was all over your childhood and that pretty nice about how you and your…[Read more]

  • Shadow Box

    Jose Tello

    The shadow box represents who I am as a person and it represents what I love and appreciate what I have. It shows who I want to become as a learner and person in the future. I put objects

    • Dear jose tello,

      Thank you for sharing your work. My name Dorlin Lopez and I am a student at Fremont High School.
      Something I liked about your work was how you put your Identities in the shadow box about what the thing you like .
      Something I have a question about is what part of mexico are you. Please feel free to comment on my work in the future. The address of my student blog is dorlinlfhs2021.edublos.org
      Thank You!Dear jose tello,

      • well thanks for commenting on my work dorlin, i showed my idetities to see how people would react to it and so that people can see the real me. Im not from Mexico im from oakland, my parents where born in Mexico. My mom in Michoacan and dad in Tlaxcala by puebla. BUt thanks again, I would love to comment on your work.

    • Dear Jose,
      Thank you for sharing your work. My name is Daniela and I am a student at Fremont High School. Something I liked about your work is that you said your proud to be latino and you should be and no one should change that. It’s a good thing to be proud for who you are. Something I have a question about is how you said you want to be a mexican musician or a USAF pilot which one would you rather be? Why? Please feel free to comment on my work in the future. The address to my student blog is Danielaofhs2021.
      Thank you!

    • Dear Jose

      I am very interested in your shadow box because i learned new stuff about you. It has lots of objects that represent you as a person. I learned that you really like to play instruments like valve trombone. You like to play when you’re bored because then you won’t get bored. Another thing that stood out to me was that you are mexican because i am also mexican because it also represent me as a latina. Thank you for your amazing shadow box I learned a lot of interesting things about you.

  • Jose became a registered member 2 years, 2 months ago

    • Dear Jose

      I don’t agree with neighbors,friends and families being kicked out when new people move in they are just strangers. Even if the new strangers become friends with you who to say they won’t get kicked out. It is one big cycle of Gentrification.This all happens because pay goes to high were people can’t afford to pay rent. Since pay is t…[Read more]

      • Dear Jose,
        Thank you for sharing your work. My name is Nakiya Cooper and I am a student at Fremont High School.
        Something I liked about your work was how u include the Navy in your work.
        Something I have a question about is why you did not include more things about yourself. Please feel free to comment on my work in the future. The address of…[Read more]

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