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This is a fictional narrative.
Montana isn’t called the big sky state for no reason. It is the closest to the wild in the continental States, with the bright plumage of birds flocking overhead and wh
Read MoreThis is a fictional narrative. Montana isn’t called the big sky state for no reason. It is the closest to the wild in the continental States, with the bright plumage of birds flocking overhead and white-tailed deer grazing. You could...
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Joseph commented on the post, "Through My Eyes"
That’s an amazing poem, Paul. I like how you have a deep insight to what you feel and how everyone has their own thought, making us different. I thought that examples of how things we perceive different were crucial, where they seem so rudimentary but it evokes complexity of thought as well as vast differences. Nice job.
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I am from flowers, from MiracleGro and gardens.
I am from the yellow and bricked house with the blazing orange fireplace.
I am from the Colorado Blue Spruce, the Norway Evergreen whose height I aspire to
Read MoreI am from flowers, from MiracleGro and gardens. I am from the yellow and bricked house with the blazing orange fireplace. I am from the Colorado Blue Spruce, the Norway Evergreen whose height I aspire to attain. I am from heart-reading and...
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This poem is beautiful. I like the way you used metaphors and personification to exemplify who you are as a person. I find this very relatable, coming from a place that is also very centered around nature. I would love to hear more about the place you come from and how it has shaped who you are as a person. Great post!
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Joseph, I love your poem. It depicts such a clear and vivid image of where you are from. I think it was a very personal poem and I loved how raw and authentic it was. I also really liked the language you used in your poem. I would really love to read more about where your from and how your home has shaped who you are and what you love. Overall, this was a great poem!
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This is such a beautiful poem. I love the analogy of the height you aspire to as well as the final line about the branch. That was so beautiful! very creative. very well done! -V -
Wow Joseph this is such a beautiful poem. Your last sentence is so detailed
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Joseph,
Thank you for sharing this story. It’s very creative! I loved the descriptions you used, you painted a picture of the great Montana wilderness using only your words. I also like the way you wrote the story, especially when you were able to slow the reader down by dragging your words out. You really made me feel like I was in Montana. You may like this short story that also takes place in Montana, https://www.shortstoryproject.com/walking-out/.