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Dear Jose,
I am moved by the choice of words and how you expressed what you were truly trying to say.
One sentence you wrote that stood out to me was, “Living in one’s shadow can also be cold and lonely. Living up to expectations can kill your confidence.” This stood out to me because if you only try to be like other people in the end it’ll only kill you, you cant base your confidence on someone else personality.
Thanks for your writing. I look forward to seeing what you write next because I was really moved by what you wrote.
Lexany