• Joselyn wrote a new post, look for dad 3 weeks ago

    So far the issues in “a wrinkle in time” reminds me of the communities. The characters remind me of this because the book talks about two children who are looking for their dad who was a scientist and got lost in

    • Nancy replied 2 weeks ago

      Der Joselyn,

      I am impressed with your post, “Look for Dad,” because what you are talking about is that children never gave up they were going to give up until their mother is saying she was not going to return.
      One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is “In the communities there are many children without their father. and they are looking for their father in the hope of finding him. ”I think this is fine because if people can disappear from night to morning but there is always the hope that they will return.
      Thanks for your writing. I look forward to seeing what you write next, because I would like it if one day those children lost hope oh they did find their father.

      Nancy

  • Dear Liz vazquez:
    I am happy with your post “La Temporada de invierno es mi temporada” because a mi tambien me gusta el invierno porque tomo chocolate caliente.También me gusta por que puedo estar en mi cama con mis cobijas viendo youtube.

    One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is “me alegra esta temporada”creo que esto es emociona…[Read more]

  • Hasta ahora la trama en Explores the world me recuerda también que en el Amazonas también se está quemando igual como dice el libro.también dice que si se acaban los árboles del amazonas mucha gente podría sufri

    • Dear Jocelyn:

      I’m surprised by his post, “Explore the world,” because this title is very important to me. This is something that everyone should be informed about what happens with the Amazon. It is very sad that the animals that live there are dying.

      One sentence he wrote that stands out to me is: “if the trees of the Amazon are over, many people could suffer from lack of oxygen.” I think this is horrible because everyone will die and nobody does anything. It is very sad that other people are not interested.

      Thanks for writing I hope to see what you write next, because for me this title is very important. This is what I want to hear to be more informed. I want to do more about this so people want to hear.

      Samantha.

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