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    The Pandemic Truth

    I have learned a lot from this pandemic. Like everyone, the daily routine I and everyone else has followed, waking up and going to school or work then after coming home, has changed. From not being able to go...

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    Jonathan commented on the post, The World is Ending

    Hey maxwell,

    I really liked your post. I liked how you connected your childhood past to connect with what is happening in the world. The world is being destroyed by humans and eventually the Earth will not be livable.

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    I have always focused on the problem with zoos. My articles have always been more one sided. It is hard to reason and look at another point of view someone else is feeling when you disagree with it so much. No

    Backlash on Zoos

    I have always focused on the problem with zoos. My articles have always been more one sided. It is hard to reason and look at another point of view someone else is feeling when you disagree with it so...

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    • Hi jonathan, your post is good.
      I like your idea about the problem of zoos. The zoo lack lots of regulation, they are to hurry to put it in run to make money. This is hurt for animals. Also the limited places will hurt animals’ behave too. Here’s some sources that might help you:
      https://medium.economist.com/how-to-make-zoos-happier-places-52734e2d5f02

    • You did a good job on your post and explaining the side you disagree with. I think zoos aren’t the best of places, but in some cases, the animals living in zoos have a higher quality of life than living in the wild. Many of the wild risks are taken away, making the animals happier.
      This article goes more in depth about this: https://www.theguardian.com/science/lost-worlds/2014/aug/19/why-zoos-are-good

    • Great post Jonathan!
      I like your approach to the issue and the way you pointed out the specific problems. It is shocking to discover how animals are treated at what is suppose to be their home. I think the link attached below will provide you with additional facts and give you a broader perspective into this issue.

      https://cc.bingj.com/cache.aspx?q=zoos+mistreating+anaimals&d=4865996210572505&mkt=en-US&setlang=en-US&w=4LNGjzq67JGkzL_FTSvPGnAS1WEx5kGp

    • Johnny, Good work with this article I agree with you that Zoo’s are having issues. Here is an article that maybe could help you out with your issues with the zoos.

      Zoos: Pitiful Prisons

    • Hi Jonathan, I also agree with your argument. This topic does not get as much publicity as it should. But the lack of regulations and ability to take care of the animals is really depressing and sad. But thank you for bring it closer to the light. I found more info that you might find interesting here: https://www.peta.org/issues/animals-in-entertainment/animals-used-entertainment-factsheets/zoos-pitiful-prisons/

    • The article “Backlash on Zoos” provides the writer’s opinion and examples regarding the treatment of animals in zoos. He mentions how others think animals found in zoos are treated poorly but he also mentions how that is not the case in every zoo. Every zoo is different and some are more caring and responsible towards their animals and make do with what they have available. The writer also mentions an example of why it is difficult to tell when an animal is in need of help and proceeds to show an example of a giraffe and her unborn baby.

      I really appreciate you bring into attention the treatment and examples of zoos. I agree with your provided article that some zoos are not the best with their treatment toward their animals but yet how some zoos are not as bad and actually be helpful and beneficial for animals. I understand your feelings towards many zoos because it is true that many have horrible treatment towards their animals and agree with the anger many have towards their treatment.

      How do you think we can bring more awareness to the maltreatment of animals in zoos?

      #OCHS

  • Hey Kheriya,

    I relayed liked what you had to say. Drug addiction and gun violence is very prevalent in our society and people need to become aware of how much it has affected the community around us. I think you should add quotes from articles to help support your evidence saying in this article here are the facts that other people have found.…Read More

  • Hey Michael,

    I like what you said. You made a lot of good points that we should care for Gods creation. I think you should add direct quotes from the Bible and other religious scriptures where you see this to add more evidence. You should also add an example in which you might see Religion portrayed as an obstacle to change where you do see it…Read More

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    Public zoos are funded by the government, donations, and revenue from entrance fees, to merchandise, and food. Private zoos usually do not have the same budgets as public zoos. By this I am only comparing the

    Public and Private Zoos

    Public zoos are funded by the government, donations, and revenue from entrance fees, to merchandise, and food. Private zoos usually do not have the same budgets as public zoos. By this I am only comparing the Hogle Zoo, and...

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    Hey Santiago,

    I like your initial approach to use social media. Because of the way it can spread information is useful. Even though it was not successful there are other ways of spreading awareness of this. Going through your own neighborhood and talking to people about this problem or asking strangers as they walk by for their opinion. Hard…Read More

  • Hey Kaitlyn!

    This topic has really made me think about the food industry and obesity. I first thought about how geology makes a big impact on good health including exercise. Being in Utah we have access to much many outdoor activities but places like Arizona and Florida is the summer is hot where people want to spend more time indoors where it…Read More

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    I have learned that there are many different reasons why animals should and should not be in zoos. The most significant reason that they should not be in zoos is based on land. Many animals travel in packs and

    The Effects of Zoos

    I have learned that there are many different reasons why animals should and should not be in zoos. The most significant reason that they should not be in zoos is based on land. Many animals travel in packs and...

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    • Dear Jonathan:
      I am concerned about your post, ” The Effects of Zoos” because the Zoos keep animals in a small space when animals need more room. I also seen that you sated “There is also a high infant mortality rate despite being in a facility that prevents other animals from killing.” This concerns me because Zoos are supposed to keep them safe. Thank you for writing. I look forward to seeing what you write next because this was interesting. I’ll be back to see if you post some interesting once again.

      OCHS
      Joahan

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    Jonathan commented on the post, Should We Ban Zoos?

    Hey Anthony,
    Zoos do bring us closer to animals most people would ever see in their life because of the where they are located in the world. While they are their for educational purposes, many people do not read the plaques of information on the animal, they just look at the animal and move on. The best way to learn about animals nowadays are to…Read More

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    Jonathan commented on the post, War: What's it for?

    Hey Diego, That books sounds very interesting. I think I will have to check it out. You said the book changed your views on war. What were your viewpoints it before reading the book. Is there anything you believe about war that was true before reading it and after reading it? I think it is interesting to think about how both sides are fighting for…Read More

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    There is a problem with people who text and drive. People are so attached to their phones that they use it while they drive. This distracts the driver from paying attention on the road which not only puts their

    Scaring People Who Text

    There is a problem with people who text and drive. People are so attached to their phones that they use it while they drive. This distracts the driver from paying attention on the road which not only puts their...

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    • Jonathan, you did a great job of evaluating and explaining the problem at hand then proposing a solution. The inclusion of previous trials and their success with this strategy really pointed to the potential and viability of this solution to texting and driving. Your train of logic and deduction was coherent and clear. I think your annotations only continued to make this clear and give me a better look into your deeper thought processes and how you add individualism to the solution.

  • Hey Caton, I like how you do not conform with the viewpoints of others. I like that you have formulated your own beliefs on the subject mater. When you related that America is not great solely on the basis that it has freedom is interesting. Many different countries have freedom which doesn’t make America special. I am curious on your idea of how…Read More

  • Hey Dakota, I think you make a lot of good points about how uniforms restrict people from being able to express themselves. With the quote of how “Someone will always have nicer shoes, or wear jewelry that is nicer than someone else” is very true. The idea that it will break the barrier of students with different amounts of money is not true. It…Read More

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    Zoos have created a place where people and come see exotic animals that they would not be able to in their regular life without zoos. Some causes of this might be the distance and time it would take to see an

    What Have Zoos Created?

    Zoos have created a place where people and come see exotic animals that they would not be able to in their regular life without zoos. Some causes of this might be the distance and time it would take to...

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  • Hey Christopher, I liked your story. If you are passionate about art I think you should share it and learn from what others say about it. Let art express who you are. The art you create can reflect about who you are and what your life is like. Art is pretty amazing. Keep on keeping on. I enjoyed reading your story and maybe one day you will make…Read More

  • This is a cool topic. The facts you laid to describe how Americans waste so much was well done. I liked the flow of each argument to support your overall idea. Some people could say that the 1 billion dollars wasted on unused medical supplies and excess food should go to the 1/7 Americans who go hungry and to family’s who can’t afford food or…Read More

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    Technology has not been around for that long. Innovating discoveries like planes, phones and cars started in the late 1800’s. Over the next 200 years technology just kept advancing. Just recently humans have s

    Why Have we Become so Reliant on Technology

    Technology has not been around for that long. Innovating discoveries like planes, phones and cars started in the late 1800’s. Over the next 200 years technology just kept advancing. Just recently humans have started to become reliant on technology....

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