• Hey maxwell,

    I really liked your post. I liked how you connected your childhood past to connect with what is happening in the world. The world is being destroyed by humans and eventually the Earth will not be livable.

  • I have always focused on the problem with zoos. My articles have always been more one sided. It is hard to reason and look at another point of view someone else is feeling when you disagree with it so much. No

  • Hey Kheriya,

    I relayed liked what you had to say. Drug addiction and gun violence is very prevalent in our society and people need to become aware of how much it has affected the community around us. I think you should add quotes from articles to help support your evidence saying in this article here are the facts that other people have found.…[Read more]

  • Hey Michael,

    I like what you said. You made a lot of good points that we should care for Gods creation. I think you should add direct quotes from the Bible and other religious scriptures where you see this to add more evidence. You should also add an example in which you might see Religion portrayed as an obstacle to change where you do see it…[Read more]

  • Public zoos are funded by the government, donations, and revenue from entrance fees, to merchandise, and food. Private zoos usually do not have the same budgets as public zoos. By this I am only comparing the

  • Hey Santiago,

    I like your initial approach to use social media. Because of the way it can spread information is useful. Even though it was not successful there are other ways of spreading awareness of this. Going through your own neighborhood and talking to people about this problem or asking strangers as they walk by for their opinion. Hard…[Read more]

  • Hey Kaitlyn!

    This topic has really made me think about the food industry and obesity. I first thought about how geology makes a big impact on good health including exercise. Being in Utah we have access to much many outdoor activities but places like Arizona and Florida is the summer is hot where people want to spend more time indoors where it…[Read more]

  • I have learned that there are many different reasons why animals should and should not be in zoos. The most significant reason that they should not be in zoos is based on land. Many animals travel in packs and

    • Dear Jonathan:
      I am concerned about your post, ” The Effects of Zoos” because the Zoos keep animals in a small space when animals need more room. I also seen that you sated “There is also a high infant mortality rate despite being in a facility that prevents other animals from killing.” This concerns me because Zoos are supposed to keep them safe. Thank you for writing. I look forward to seeing what you write next because this was interesting. I’ll be back to see if you post some interesting once again.

      OCHS
      Joahan

  • Hey Anthony,
    Zoos do bring us closer to animals most people would ever see in their life because of the where they are located in the world. While they are their for educational purposes, many people do not read the plaques of information on the animal, they just look at the animal and move on. The best way to learn about animals nowadays are to…[Read more]

  • Hey Diego, That books sounds very interesting. I think I will have to check it out. You said the book changed your views on war. What were your viewpoints it before reading the book. Is there anything you believe about war that was true before reading it and after reading it? I think it is interesting to think about how both sides are fighting for…[Read more]

  • There is a problem with people who text and drive. People are so attached to their phones that they use it while they drive. This distracts the driver from paying attention on the road which not only puts their

    • Jonathan, you did a great job of evaluating and explaining the problem at hand then proposing a solution. The inclusion of previous trials and their success with this strategy really pointed to the potential and viability of this solution to texting and driving. Your train of logic and deduction was coherent and clear. I think your annotations only continued to make this clear and give me a better look into your deeper thought processes and how you add individualism to the solution.

  • Hey Caton, I like how you do not conform with the viewpoints of others. I like that you have formulated your own beliefs on the subject mater. When you related that America is not great solely on the basis that it has freedom is interesting. Many different countries have freedom which doesn’t make America special. I am curious on your idea of how…[Read more]

  • Hey Dakota, I think you make a lot of good points about how uniforms restrict people from being able to express themselves. With the quote of how “Someone will always have nicer shoes, or wear jewelry that is nicer than someone else” is very true. The idea that it will break the barrier of students with different amounts of money is not true. It…[Read more]

  • Zoos have created a place where people and come see exotic animals that they would not be able to in their regular life without zoos. Some causes of this might be the distance and time it would take to see an

  • Hey Christopher, I liked your story. If you are passionate about art I think you should share it and learn from what others say about it. Let art express who you are. The art you create can reflect about who you are and what your life is like. Art is pretty amazing. Keep on keeping on. I enjoyed reading your story and maybe one day you will make…[Read more]

  • This is a cool topic. The facts you laid to describe how Americans waste so much was well done. I liked the flow of each argument to support your overall idea. Some people could say that the 1 billion dollars wasted on unused medical supplies and excess food should go to the 1/7 Americans who go hungry and to family’s who can’t afford food or…[Read more]

  • Technology has not been around for that long. Innovating discoveries like planes, phones and cars started in the late 1800’s. Over the next 200 years technology just kept advancing. Just recently humans have s

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