• Kate Aubusson say that there are other ways that school girls more likely to become parent, so Kate help them by practice with a doll to look like a baby, if teen girls can take care of their own baby’s, and it


    This are my question on my social issue topic that i choose to research:

    Who are the girls that get pregnant in high school 
    What happen to teenage girls when they drop out of high school
    When d


    It a book about La LLorona the weeping woman by Vicki Treco & Mona Pennypacker.I feel that I did pretty good cause I can make different tone and it help me alot to hear myself.





    Ted secret to great public speaking and good and bad example of presentation
    Anderson want the views to become a great speaker is to transfer into a listener’s mind. For whatever your topic is y



    I learn that the XP challenge was fun because I have to create many this for my play and I have to make it seems like the play in the movie, but it was fun thing to do.
    Why do we have to create this play?


  • Ted secret to great public speaking, good and bad oral presentation.*  Second rabison how they already know what to say, your mind is tingling with ideas it your brain operation system. And there are million of p


    The reason why Shakespeare is still studied in school is to let people think that there are things they should know between people that are in love. The video “Why Study Shakespeare” talked about race,

  • This is my best analysis of Othello.

    “Her honor is an essence that’s not seen, they have it very oft that have it not, but for the handkerchief by heaven, I would most gladly have forgot it, though said o, it c


    I chose the play of Shakespeare’s Othello, act 3, scene 3, lines 68-78. The role I played is Desdemona. I learned that the more you practice the more your voice will sound better. You can change your t

  • To the YV community, this is my response to the Warm-Up for English class today. We are studying Shakespeare’s Othello and exploring the theme of appearance versus r

  • Dear Mr. President:

    Hi, my name is Kim Toli. I am 17 years old, and I’m a senior student at Fremont High School. One problem that I always see in our country is that lots of people are selling drugs. We s

    • Dear Kim,
      It seems to me that this issue is very important to you. However, I’m a little confused as to what you mean by saying drugs affect other people because of the smell of the drug. Also, do you have any suggestions for the president to solve this problem?

    • I had the same question as Anna about the smell of the drugs. I think your letter has a unique and important flavor because you have direct experience in the subject you are talking about. I think this letter would benefit from you adding more of your experiences and opinions and memories about Oakland. Also, you should consider adding some background about Mr. Matarrese before quoting him so that the audience is more likely to connect with his words and put weight on them. This article is relatable and personal and gives a good sense of your community. You should really think about expanding this.

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