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    The reason why Shakespeare is still studied in school is to let people think that there are things they should know between people that are in love. The video “Why Study Shakespeare” talked about race,

  • This is my best analysis of Othello.

    “Her honor is an essence that’s not seen, they have it very oft that have it not, but for the handkerchief by heaven, I would most gladly have forgot it, though said o, it c

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    I chose the play of Shakespeare’s Othello, act 3, scene 3, lines 68-78. The role I played is Desdemona. I learned that the more you practice the more your voice will sound better. You can change your t

  • Kim wrote a new post, unwanted letter 2 months ago

    To the YV community, this is my response to the Warm-Up for English class today. We are studying Shakespeare’s Othello and exploring the theme of appearance versus r

  • Dear Mr. President:

    Hi, my name is Kim Toli. I am 17 years old, and I’m a senior student at Fremont High School. One problem that I always see in our country is that lots of people are selling drugs. We s

    • Dear Kim,
      It seems to me that this issue is very important to you. However, I’m a little confused as to what you mean by saying drugs affect other people because of the smell of the drug. Also, do you have any suggestions for the president to solve this problem?

    • I had the same question as Anna about the smell of the drugs. I think your letter has a unique and important flavor because you have direct experience in the subject you are talking about. I think this letter would benefit from you adding more of your experiences and opinions and memories about Oakland. Also, you should consider adding some background about Mr. Matarrese before quoting him so that the audience is more likely to connect with his words and put weight on them. This article is relatable and personal and gives a good sense of your community. You should really think about expanding this.

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