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  • Dear Kris,
    I really like how you opened up, it looks like you were being honest. I look forward to see your next post.

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    Jocelin commented on the post, Meeting Destiny

    Dear Arely,
    Thanks for your beautiful comic, I look forward to seeing your next post. I really liked how you you put your feelings in your comic, I can tell how much you love destiny.!

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    I kept asking myself,

    Why did my parents divorce?

    Weren’t we going to be the perfect family?

    Time passed and my father left

    He left to Mexico

    Why?

    Another bump in my road

    Why did he leave?

    When is t

    Unexpected

    I kept asking myself, Why did my parents divorce? Weren’t we going to be the perfect family? Time passed and my father left He left to Mexico Why? Another bump in my road Why did he leave? When is the next time I’ll...

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    • Jocelin,
      I enjoyed reading your memoir, you have a lot of emotions going on and you were brave enough to talk about it and sharing it with an audience it’s probably hard for you that you can’t see your dad as much and that sucks because you really wanted to spend time with him, the part when you said that you accepted his apology it shows a strong impact on you because it shows that you are a forgiving person. Good Job!

    • Hi Joce,

      I loved your poem. I think it is super strong and well written. I liked that you were able to open up and talk about a time that was difficult and how you handled that. The part that stood out to me the most was the part where you took initiative and called your dad then visited him even if it wasn’t as planned. It says a lot about who you are are your values. This is a great story Jocelin.

      Thank for sharing!

      Love,
      Chata

    • Dear Jocelin,
      I enjoyed reading your memoir because it is something personal and I can also relate to it. I’m glad that you were able to open up and let us know about a difficult time in your life. I can relate to so many things written down in this memoir. Some lines that stood out to me were,”If something happens to him I wouldn’t forgive myself.” This stood out to me because I also don’t talk to my dad and I know it’s not right but I have resentment for all he has done but at the end he’s my dad and I wouldn’t want something to happen to him. I feel like there’s a lot that we can relate in. Thanks for your writing about this because just like me, there’s probably others that can also relate to you. I’ll be looking forward to more of your posts.
      -yahaira

  • Thank you for your art work Chente. I really liked how you went into detail with the mariachi’s outfits!

  • Thanks for writing, I look forward to seeing what you will post in the future because you are capable of doing good.

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