• Joan commented on the post, JazzDanceBeat 6 days, 12 hours ago

    I am amazed about this your music called “JazzDanceBeat”
    because the music changes in the middle of the song .
    One line was in the middle of the song , it changes beat .your song reminds me of the 80’s jazz music. Thanks for your music . I look forward to seeing what you make next because I like jazz beats .

  • The final section of Orange Is The New Black by Piper Kerman Might leave a reader feeling satisfied because when piper got out of jail she got a job, and she’s scared to go to the right path.

    An example of

  • Dear Christian,
    I am interested about your post of “Who will be our Next President?” because it would be interesting to see who would control the United States and how he or she would control it.
    One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is “Donald Trump is being investigated and might be removed from office” I think this is important because…[Read more]

  • The fourth part of Orange Is The New Black by Piper Kerman  might leave a reader feeling interested because piper is talking about of heer interested in yoga and her daily routines. An example of this on on page

  • The third section of Orange Is The New Black by Piper Kerman might leave a reader feeling scared because if i would be in her shoes i would be scared of this woman who looked like Popeye. An example is on page

  • thank you Bella for your feedback

  • The second section in Orange Is The New Black by Piper Kerman might leave a reader feeling interested because on page #58 says “After an hour or so on the landing next to the visiting  room, i began to wander th

  • The message of this music video is that some people bite the hands that feed them , it also tells us that this nightmare needs to stop , it says that we should take the sick people and the people who are

  • The first sections of Orange Is The New Black by Piper Kerman might leave readers interested because how can a professional college graduate be dealing drugs were she can have a great career? On page 4 is an

  • The first section of Orange Is The New Black by Piper Kerman might leave readers interested because how can a professional college graduate be dealing drugs were she can have a great career? On page 4 is an

    • Hi, Joan,

      I also read the book Orange is the New Black, and I watched the Netflix show as well. I loved this book and I’m glad it resonated with you too. I believe that this book illustrates what an urgent problem mass incarceration is in the United States coming from Piper’s perspective as a woman who was in prison. I liked how you connected this book to “El Señor de Los Cielos” as I had not previously heard of this show and I’m intrigued to watch it.

      I recommend looking more into the problem of mass incarceration in the United States as unfortunately Orange is the New Black is not a fictional book. Here’s a link with more info about the problem: https://www.aclu.org/issues/smart-justice/mass-incarceration

      Looking forward to what you write next,


    • Joan replied 1 month ago

      thank you Bella for your feedback

  • This image shows people protesting against the police about someone who had his hands up with no weapon and the police still started to shoot him ,and killed him. One central idea I got from this image was that

  • Text and drive is bad because there has been major accidents in the world in this one of the main reason Most crashes are caused by people like you and me who think they can pay attention to the road and do

    • Hello Joan,
      I know text and drive has been a big topic in driving. Avoiding being on the phone while driving is an essential rule to insure both the drivers and the pedestrians.
      View at Medium.com


  • Shooting games should be banned because shooting games affects little kids life in a negative way , when kids play these shooting games they are being exposed to see violence, that’s why this country has a lot

    • Estimado Joan:
      Estoy muy interesada, con su publicación, “Los juegos de disparos deberían estar prohibidos”, por que es muy importante que los padres de familia estén enterados de que los juegos de disparos no son solo juegos. Pueden ocasionar graves problemas a muchas personas por hacer este tipo de juegos. Muchos de los niños de ahora solo quieren jugar esos juegos y los padres no miran el daño que le están causando a sus hijos.
      Una frase que usted escribió que se destaca para mi es: “cuando los niños juegan estos juegos de disparos están expuestos a la violencia” creo que esto es muy cierto porque como antes lo había mencionado los niños están expuestos a un grave peligro.
      Por eso los padres deben vigilar que juegos juegan sus hijos que no sean muy riesgosos para ellos.

    • Hey Joan, I appreciate your concern with violent video games and the effect it has on our youth, because it is a new issue that we are just beginning to deal with. However before you make the claim that violent video games have led to the increase in school shootings I think you should understand some important facts. Violent video games are played all over the world, not just in the US. The US is leading by far in school shootings so this is clearly not the issue. If violent video games were increasing youth violence we would see an increase in violence in every country as result of the violent video games not just America. Along with this, it’s important to understand all the other forms of violent media kids are receiving today. Between movies, TV shows and social media, video games takes a back seat to the amount of violence seen in these medias. An article I found helpful in understanding this issue is https://www.nytimes.com/2019/08/05/sports/trump-violent-video-games-studies.html

    • Jack replied 2 months ago

      The games aren’t mean’t for young kids and while It could attribute to some what shootings. I think that mental health and gun control maybe more likely problems leading to shootings.

  • One thing that others like but I don’t like is drugs. These days now you got kids under the age of 15 using drugs and smoking weed. These things are bad for the people because these kids are getting sick, and

    • my name is Yeury nicasio , i disagree with your argument because i smoke weed myself and when i get to school i go straight to my classes and get all my work done. i know that kids that are 15 years old are smoking weed but you don’t know what the been thru they whole life so they just choose to smoke some weed. And also i disagree with you when you said that when kids get to school they mind is not there. thats person choice to do that , kids just go to school high and get dumb.

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