I like that not only you make a convincing argument in your essay and show the conflict very well but also the fact that by the time I reach your conclusion you have a very good idea for how to resolve the problem you earlier presented.

I definitely like the them you are going for here. I think you could afford a little more on the overall concept but the story and necessary development for it are definitely present. Good work.

Super talented piece. I reflected on my own upbringing while reading your piece and was really drawn into the reading. I could really visually the never ending pews and almost tasted the garlic bread, keep it up!

I've actually thought about how much the shoe runners wear affects their performance. I am really interested in learning about this new topic and what your research paper ends up looking like.

This piece was very well formatted and kept itself concise and to the point. I would like to know more about the dichotomy between prisons and the ages of the inmates.

That is a great way to start out your research. I am definitely interested to see what more you will find out about the early church. I wish you had also I could've had summarized with a little more about each article so I could've known more about what...

This poem does a very good job at raising the intense feeling that both the pace of your poem and message encourages us too. Leaving out the politics you had very good pacing of your stanza and keep your point short and sweet.

Beautiful poem, I feel a lot of remorse and bittersweet afterword. The concluding sentence really strikes home for what the audience has been dreading and is a powerful piece overall.

I really appreciated the fact that you inputted actual sources into your paper. It makes your paper a lot more trustworthy and annunciates the point. I would suggest that you reword your closing statement. The rest of the essay is just so well put that the closing statement seems...

Beautiful poem, I think your use of descriptive words fit really well together and help to escalate your poem as a whole. The poem flows well and each thought you provide for us to all question is spaced far enough that we can think each through individual idea.

I think that you might have a good concept here but a lot of the meaning is lost by the errors you have in your essay. Semantically, gramatically, and with your spelling mistakes I find myself disenfranchised with your paper and struggle to find its purpose. I would say...

Hi there Lilian, I work with immigrants, refugees, and displaced families at my job. I teach the children of these families and peoples a basic education course, including STEM and the liberal arts in classes between 15 and 30. Personally, in the year or so I've been working there...

While I think the rights of the individual should be respected I also believe we should not entertain the idea if it is something that puts the entire society at risk. Rather than make the question of whether we should even mandate the process of vaccination, I believe we...

I have to say this piece struck me. I have yet to read a better formatted paper on this site. Your use of vivid detail and vibrant description was able to make me shiver in real time. It seems you have a deep personal connection from your essay and...

I definitely agree, I don't think it's necessarily bad to have differing opinions and makes better humans most of time. Good job, yeah.