•  Knock knock 

    When I heard the door, the bell rang as well.

    “Get the door please Sasha!!” said Ms. Charles, my last period teacher.

       Creep, creep, creep

     Ms.Williams heels cracking on the floor

    • you painted such a vivid picture i think many of us around the world can relate to. great work!.

    • Dear jackson:
      I am impressed by your story “the end of the semester”, because you were able to paint a very vivid picture of your experience.
      One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is: “Ms.Williams heels cracking on the floor” I think this is beautiful writing because it shows very good attention to detail.
      Another sentence that I loved was: ‘Something I have found out about myself from this experience is I can do better.” This stood out for me because it shows a lesson you learned from this experience.
      Thanks for your writing. I look forward to seeing what you write next because your writing style and attention to detail are very mature.

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