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Dear Chole, Your initial analysis was done very well. I can tell that you have thought deeply about the subject. I personally really like your word choice. Your word is strong and really adds a punch and it puts your work on a different level. The words you chose also...

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A Poem of Mexico View Comment
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  • May 1, 2019

Dear Wendy, "A poem of Mexico" is a very versatile poem. There are many literary devices that you use that really bring out the poem. Specifically your use of repetition makes the poem more powerful. When you repeat she waits, it just adds more...

Dear Julissa, Your bio is really well written. You do an amazing job describing yourself. I definitely agree with you when you say you think you're a great dancer. You have so many different interests and its so cool. You have really great...

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In My Neighborhood View Comment
  • @jillianw
  • April 10, 2019

Dear George, I love your post "In my neighborhood". Your photos overall are amazing. The angles and lighting really add the pictures. My favorite photo is the 3rd photos. It sets a different perspective than your other ones. I personally feel that your other...

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Frenzy View Comment
  • @jillianw
  • March 25, 2019

Dear Mariam, Your poem “frenzy” is very relatable. I remember a moment in time when something like this happened. Your poem made me feel different emotions depending on the line that I was on. Your poem does a great job at evoking memories and different...

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raining View Comment
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  • March 25, 2019

Dear Ajaeya, Your poem “raining” is truly magnificent. I personally enjoy the rain and doing rainy day activities. The rain makes me feel calm and at peace. Your poem perfectly describes how I feel when it’s raining. In addition, your poem does a great job at...

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C is for Consent View Comment
  • @jillianw
  • March 19, 2019

Dear Iween, Your poem is very strong. The adjectives you chose evoke a lot of different feelings. You interpreted a syllabic poem in a new and original way. This poem i feel brings awareness to such a difficult topic.

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