I am interested in your post. The topic of bullying in school is interesting to me because many kids in school are getting bullied and no one does anything about it. It’s interesting that you say teachers don’t do their jobs in stopping bullying.

One sentence you wrote that stands out to me is “Students do not deserve to be getting bullied every day and the district from schools aren’t doing anything about it.” I think that this is not nesseraily true because if the student doesn’t tell an adult about what’s going on then they can’t do anything about it if they don’t know about it.

Thanks for your writing. I look forward to seeing what you write next because I find bullying in school an interesting topic. I would like you to continue telling people about bullying in school.

Damian

I am interested in your post. The topic of bullying in school is interesting to me because many kids in school are getting bullied and no one does anything about it. It’s interesting that you say teachers don’t do their jobs in stopping bullying.

One sentence you wrote that stands out to me is “Students do not deserve to be getting bullied every day and the district from schools aren’t doing anything about it.” I think that this is not nesseraily true because if the student doesn’t tell an adult about what’s going on then they can’t do anything about it if they don’t know about it.

Thanks for your writing. I look forward to seeing what you write next because I find bullying in school an interesting topic. I would like you to continue telling people about bullying in school.

Damian

I am very interested in your post. Bullying is a very serious thing and people don’t do anything about it. People will see someone getting bullied and they won’t do nothing.

I agree with you when you say that teachers don’t do enough to stop bullying because kids are getting bullied everyday and don’t do nothing. Teachers always say to tell someone you trust if your getting bullied but it’s not easy to tell someone your getting bullied. One sentence that stands out to me is “A girl named Isabella committed suicide after being harassed at the age of 10″ because nobody notice or cares until something bad happens.

Thanks for your writing I look forward to seeing what you write next because you have a topic that not a lot of people care for and I hope you bring up another topic that is under the radar and I hope you help stop bullying.

Jonathan

I am interested in your post. The topic of bullying in school is interesting to me because many students in school get bullied and no one does anything. It’s interesting that you say teachers don’t do their jobs of stop preventing bullying or in stopping bullying by talking to students.

One sentence you wrote that stands out to me is “Students do not deserve to be getting bullied every day and the district from schools aren’t doing anything about it.” I think that this is not necessarily true because if the kids don’t say anything of what happening to them how are the elders going to know whats happening so they can know whats happening.

Thanks for your post. I look forward to seeing what you write next because I find bullying in school or anywhere an interesting topic. I would like you to continue telling people about bullying in school.

Hi Jeramiah-
You mention population reduction and the unwillingness to take responsibility for the child. What other pro-choice arguments did you find in the article?

Ms. N.

DearJeramiahI am happy with your post, Abortion should be stopped! because I agree with what you have to say. Also, abortion is something considered a bad thing.
One sentence you wrote that stood out for me is “Abortion is murder”. I think this qoute is important because people may be like he still hasnt seen the world yet it cant be considered murdered. But I beleive it is murder because by the team they find out there pregnant that baby in you has a little tiny heart beat.

Thanks for your writing. I look forward to seeing what you write next, because I like what you had to say towards the idea for how abortion is bad. Also I like how the ideas you have how people may react towards all that.

Brian Garcia

Dear Jeremiah, 
I am in awe of your post “Abortion Should Be Stopped” because I 100% agree with you that abortion should be stopped. This is such a controversial topic and I believe it should be banned. 
One sentence you wrote that stood out to me was “No human’s life should be taken voluntarily at the hands of another. Abortion is murder.” I think this is extremely important how someone should not have the life of someone in their hands. I don’t think people should be punished for it but abortion should be banned. 
Thank you for your writing. I hope to see what you write next because this was an important and interesting topic. 
Karen. 

Dear Jeramiah, 

I disagree with your opinion as I believe that abortion should be legal as it allows the woman to safely abort the fetus. Additionally, I do not consider it murder as they are aborting a fetus and it is not alive and is legal in the first trimester of pregnancy. There may be cases in which they are not financially stable to take care of the baby or even the fact that it may possibly have been a sexual assault that caused them to be pregnant. Furthermore, there might be some life complications that force the woman to abort the fetus. Additionally, women fought for a long time in order to have the right to abort the fetus as it affects their future and it is their right to decide whether or not to abort. 

One sentence that stood out to me was “This shouldn’t be a thing and just let the kid go up for adoption if you don’t want to take any responsibility.” I disagree with this statement as aborting the fetus does not mean not taking up responsibility as it may have been a sexual assault case which means that they did not have a choice. I do agree that if it was with consent, the people should have thought about the situation before thinking of the option of abortion. However, it is a woman’s right to abort the fetus if they see that they cannot provide a better future and as you stated about giving birth and sending the baby to adoption, there are already numerous children in the foster care system who experience child maltreatment as well as other effects that it may have on a child. 

Thank you for writing, I look forward to reading what you post next as this was an interesting controversial topic.

Linette