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  • Oakland, California, USA
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    HIV Infected Mothers                                          

     

    Imagine dying from something simple as a cold. Which is one of the effects of HIV. HIV originated in Southeastern Cameroon. HIV which stands f

    HIV Infected Mothers

    HIV Infected Mothers                                             Imagine dying from something simple as a cold. Which is one of the effects of HIV. HIV originated in Southeastern Cameroon. HIV which stands for Human Immunodeficiency Virus, was being transmitted to numerous of people. HIV...

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    Dear Westcoast Children’s Clinic:

    We chose to write to your organization because we want to help stop child sex trafficking. We know that by doing this we won’t necessarily stop worldwide child trafficking,

    Children Are Not For Sale

    Authors Dear Westcoast Children's Clinic: We chose to write to your organization because we want to help stop child sex...

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    • Hello everyone.

      My name is Tania and I am a student at Fremont High School here in Oakland. I just read your project blog post and I have some feedback.
      One thing I liked about what you wrote was how you made the reading interesting. I liked how you used percentages of the races that are being the most sex trafficked. I also liked how in your article you are describing ideas on how to stop the sex trafficking.

      Something I have a question about is doesn’t Oakland have the most sex trafficking in the unity?

      Thank you for sharing your project!
      Tania

    • My name is Tamiya’h and I am a student at Fremont High School here in Oakland. I just read your project blog post and I have some feedback.
      One thing I liked about what you wrote was how serious you guys are about this topic, i like how you guys made it interesting with the percentages and stuff too.

      Something I have a question about is where else do they sex trafficking at.

      Thank you for sharing your project!
      Tamiya’h

    • Dear Erika,
      Thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment to our proposal. The rates of child sex trafficking in Oakland is very high although we couldn’t find stats by we could do later research. But we would appreciate if you would also support us in our movement by donating. Thank you

      Sincerely,
      Melody,Francisco and Jennifer

    • Dear Jennifer, Melody and francisco,

      I appreciated that you guys share this with us, since it’s a big issue not only in Oakland it’s all over the world. I liked the fact that you guys add logos, pathos and ethos. This is a very interested topic but I feel you guys can add more logos about Oakland like, What’s the percentage of Child Traffic here in Oakland? What is the percentage of Child Traffic in African American community? How about Hispanic community? But you guys did a great work! Since you guys give methods to stop it.

      Sincerely,

      Andrea Fonseca

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       Nazi and Human Experiments  

             By:Jennifer Sanchez

     

    Did you knew that Nazis did medical experiments on humans ? On February 24, 1920 the Nazi party was founded. The Nazi was ruling in Germany an

    Nazi Experiments On Humans

       Nazi and Human Experiments            By:Jennifer Sanchez   Did you knew that Nazis did medical experiments on humans ? On February 24, 1920 the Nazi party was founded. The Nazi was ruling in Germany and their leader was Adolf Hitler....

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    • Dear Jennifer,
      Your writing about the Nazi experiments was very good. It presented many different pieces of evidence and it made your claim very clear. I agree with you that the experiments are now beneficial to us because we were able to learn new things from these experiments but I don’t think this was the correct way to get answers to our questions. Thank you for your writing. I look forward to your read and learn from your future posts.

      • Dear Eli,

        Thank you for replying back to my essay about Nazi human research. Iḿ glad you agree with me about this topic.

    • I agree with you it was beneficial but it could have been achieved in a different way.

    • Dear Jennnifer,
      I agree with you. I think that some of those experiment were helpful while some were not and I think that in all of the experiments they should have found a way to make it as painless as possible.

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    Oakland’s Culture  

     

    Do you often confuse Oakland with San Francisco? We shouldn’t confuse San Francisco and Oakland because they both have very different cultures. Oakland is a diverse communit

    Oakland's Culture

                  Oakland’s Culture     Do you often confuse Oakland with San Francisco? We shouldn’t confuse San Francisco and Oakland because they both have very different cultures. Oakland is a diverse community and a very cultural town. Oakland has many things that...

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    • Dear Jennifer, Your blog was outstanding.
      Their was such great detail and you had a great hook. One sentence that stood out to me was” Although sideshows is a huge part of Oakland’s culture and unites the community it also divides the community by being a place where people can come together but can also get them arrested for all the violent and illegal
      “. This stood out to me because your are completely correct in my opinion.One question or comment that I had is i would love to see what your opinion is overall and what do you believe this does to our community. Thank you for writing this amazing blog on oakland and its culture. I look forward to seeing what you write next.

    • Dear Kayla,
      I’m glad that you enjoyed my blog! What is your opinion on Oakland’s culture? I would like to know. My opinion is that I’m in the middle I think it divides the community but unites the community at the same time. Thank you for taking the time to read my blog and hopefully you will read what I write next!

      Sincerely,
      Jennifer

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                                                                      Characters

     

    Romeo
    John

    Juliet
    Guadalupe

    Montagues
    White Supremacists

    Capulets
    illegal immigrants

    Nurse
    Juanita

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    Romeo and Juliet in 2017

                                                                        Characters   Romeo John Juliet Guadalupe Montagues White Supremacists Capulets illegal immigrants Nurse Juanita Friar Lawrence Fred Tybalt (Capulet) Jesus Mercutio (Montague) Jason Benvolio (Montague) Mat Prince USA president Verona, summertime, 1597 Charlottesville, Virginia , winter break, 2017   Scenes Fight between Montagues and Capulets White Supremacists protest against illegal immigrants Prince warning ...

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    I have chosen to include an El Salvador flag because I’m proud of being Salvadoran as my Ethnicity even though my Nationality is American. I decided to put both flags on the bottom because they have both a

    Jennifer's shadow box

    I have chosen to include an El Salvador flag because I’m proud of being Salvadoran as my Ethnicity even though my Nationality is American. I decided to put both flags on the bottom because they have both affected me...

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    • I love love love how you know the difference between ethnicity and nationality. It’s something that most people don’t understand and have it very confused which is understandable but it’s amazing that you know.I agree that being a female of color comes with struggles. I agree identity as xicana a term that is growing in population but its still not that liked people or some people just believe i’m being extra for not calling myself hispanic or latinx like i’m “supposed” too. The lights ideology really made me smile. Yes, their is always some light even when you see mostly darkness and i’m glad to hear you have support. Value that because it’s truly important for those dark moments.

    • Dear jenny
      my name is melody, I am a freshman and currently attend life academy. I really enjoyed reading your shadow box statement. there were lines in your article that I felt I could connect to. when you stated that, The” two people who helped me the most were Grady and Melody, my two best friends. Also, my sister” because the two people that supported me were Jennifer, Grady and my sister. I cant wait to see what you post next.
      best, melody

      • Dear Melody,
        I’m glad that you enjoyed reading my shadow box and that you can connect it to your life. For future comments please make sure to capitalize and read over your work thanks.

        Sincerely,
        Jennifer

    • Thank you Reyna I really appreciate the comment you left. I don’t think you are extra for not calling herself hispanic or latinx like you suppose to. You get to decided on how you want to identify yourself. I don’t be nosy but I wonder why you don’t call yourself hispanic? If you are comfortable sharing why I would really appreciate. Also I really appreciate you saying that I know the difference between ethnicity and nationality because there are so many people who don’t. Thank you Reyna.

    • hi my name is daniel i like how you put both flags on your shadow box in how you go to the musem

    • Dear Jennifer,
      I am feeling really connected with your writing, “Jennifer shadow box” because even if I’m not Salvadorian, I get affected too just by being Hispanic. Now that I see that I’m not the only one makes me feel connected towards others. One part of your writing that stands out for me is where you talked about being born here but people assume that you aren’t. I think this is a very good point to put because a lot of people assume different things, just because the way you look, where your roots come from, how you talk etc. Another part that I liked is where you talk about having a really hard time and that your two friends and sister helped you. This stood out for me because all the people I know go through that too, and get help from the people who knows them the most. Your writing reminds me of something that I made once. One time I got to say that I’m dangerous because I am Mexican and people from Mexico kills people. Also been told that all Mexicans bring drugs, it was said of President Donald Trump. I know that being other than whites with privilege we as a community have to stand up together and help each other and make these stereotypes go away. I just want to say thanks for your writing. I look forward to seeing what you do next, because I feel that you’ll make a change and help others who are going through the same thing as you get to have a better life.

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