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    So far, the plot in Wonder reminds me of the world.  In the book, he says that August when he attends school feels very strange since he had never attended a school. After a few days of August, he started to get

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    So far, the plot in Wonder reminds me of the world.  In the book, he says that August when he attends school feels very strange since he had never attended a school. After a few days of August, he...

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    • Dear Jenifer,

      I am excited with your post, ¨Critics¨ because it is not good to criticize other people. Most of the time they hurt that person they are criticizing.

      One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is ¨ August became very depressed that he ended up leaving the classroom without them noticing¨ i think this is important because so other people can know when they hurt others with their comments.

      Thanks for your writing. I look forward to seeing what you write next, because this is very important for the world to know that they can hurt other people with their comments.

      Evelyn,

    • Dear Jenifer

      I am surprised with you post ” Critics” because I think it is a bad idea to criticize other people since these people can be affected by our opinion or criticism about it.

      one phrase that you wrote that stands out to me is “The plot reminds me of this because In the world there are many people who criticize their physique when their physique does not matter. “I think that is very relevant since there are people who criticize the physical aspect

      Thank you for you writing. I look forward to seeing your next post because it was very interesting to me. And many people can be affected by negative comments from others.

      Monica

    • Dear Jenifer,

      I am impressed with your post “Critics” because it society has come up with what a person must look like and if they find something that they do not like or understand, they start to criticize that person for who they are. It does not matter to those doing the criticizing because they see it like just sharing their opinion but those types of comments are hurtful and make people insecure.

      One sentence I felt a connection to was ” August entered his class and sat next to Jack and Julian but as he was in disguise, they didn’t even realize it was him.” I think this sentence is powerful because people will not speak upon your name in front of you, they will talk behind your back. It is so hurtful for the one being talked upon and seeing August being kind and friendly doing nothing bad and seeing those around him feel the need to disrespect him.

      Thank you for writing. I will look forward to seeing what you write next, because it is very important how bully can alter someone’s life.

      Monserrat

  • Jenifer commented on the post, Spectrum

    Dear Samantha,

    Thank you for your comment. I like that you relate your life with mine because I know that I was not the only one who went through that. But in reality it is very sad to live that. And how long were you away from your mother?

    Jenifer

  • Ms. Navarro:

    Thank you for your comment on my post and if you really have a lot of emotions to see my mom again next to me.

    When Thomas came down to the basement, he found the Spectrum., but Albajar came down with much fear something uglier, but in reality it was another of the tests of the Spectrum. .

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    So far, the characters in Wonder reminds me of world.  The book talk about a child with a deformation.  His mother wants him to go to school, but he is not sure at the beginning of wanting to go.  After they go

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    So far, the characters in Wonder reminds me of world.  The book talk about a child with a deformation.  His mother wants him to go to school, but he is not sure at the beginning of wanting to go. ...

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    • Dear Jenifer,

      I am excited with your post, people’s thoughts because I think that whenever you enter another school or when you enter a new school year you get very nervous and for him it was going to be more difficult because people pointed it out.

      One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is “ He was very nervous because he didn’t know how his new teammates would react”. I think this is excellent because the child feels nervous because he is excited to go to school and I think that is a good thing.

      Thanks for your writing. I look forward to seeing what you write next, becauseIt is very interesting from what you write and I think that other people should also know about this.

      Evelyn

  • Dear Rodolfo,

    I am disappointed and curious by your post, “El hombre que engaña dos veces al diablo”, disappointed because I would have liked you to explain more, but curious because it seems that the book you were reading or reading is very interesting. But I still don’t understand how the devil went to fall into man’s traps.

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