Like some others have said in their comments, your cover photo is what drew my eye. Before I even read it, I could tell what the piece would be about because it contrasts the values of the American flag. All in all, this was a very powerful essay that highlights some personal experiences with racial injustices and struggle in America. (Nice Pfp)

Reading about the origin of your name was really interesting. This essay was incredibly heartfelt and emotional. I like how everything fits together and how it ties into your personality.

I thought this was a really well-written essay, and because I come from a background where mass incarceration is a problem in my city, I could relate to it. I was drawn in by your cover image and found myself considering how it related to what you had written. Overall, good job.

Your analysis of the article shows that you have a good understanding of the complex historical factors that led to segregation in Downtown Atlanta. I like how you draw connections between historical events and current social challenges, emphasizing the systematic injustices’ ongoing importance. Your own insight into the continued existence of…Read More

I believe you did great job of delving into some of the historical background and analyzing the issue at hand. Your cover photo was one of the things that pulled me into your work. What was the prompt you used for it, I wonder?