• In  Ryan Gabrielson, Ryann Grochowski Jones and Eric Sagara’s essay, “Deadly Force, In Black and White,” from ProPublica https://www.propublica.org/article/deadly-force-in-black-and-white, the authors this is im

  • Jeremy posted an update 3 years ago

    The days of summer is almost gone you want me ever because i’m going to a different school

  • Jeremy posted an update 3 years ago

    What new not really just that i woke up this morning to come to summer school and finish my work so i can go to the next grade. That all i want to do for my life so like that i go to the new school that is doing mechanics.

  • Dear Yanilsa,

    I am touched by your poem about Trayvon Martin, because the 17 year-old was walking home and shot because he looked suspicious. Just he had a hoodie on holding Skittles and a Arizona in his hands at

  • Jeremy posted an update 3 years ago

    Something that new in my life is that i went to the dmv yesterday with my cousin and then i went to take the permit test because i have to drive for my cousin he broke his leg in a dirt bike accent

  • Happy,

    Glad,

    Joyful,

    Cheerful

    Teen

     

    He was shot

    At a gas station

    Jacksonville, Florida.

    November 23, 2012

     

    Michael David Dunn

    took his hopes and dreams away

    He took his life a

  • Jeremy posted an update 3 years ago

    Nothing is new in life all i want is finish summer school so i can go to the next grade

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  • Jeremy posted an update 3 years ago

    What’s new in is that i’m going to a water park tomorrow with my cousin and my friends call Mountain Creek that one of the best water park there is. And a another thing i would like to do this summer go to Dorney Park

  • Jeremy commented on the post, Police Brutality 3 years ago

    Dear Cristal Briceno:

    I am afraid about, with your post “Police Brutality” because Police Brutality is really going on everywhere with color skin people.But at the same time Police shootings have caused an uproar across the country because of racism.

    One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is: “I am student that will soon be atten…[Read more]

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  • Jeremy posted an update 3 years ago

    Is nothing much in my life but this weekend i’m going to take out my permit so i can drive my cousin that broke his leg, And i’m trying to go to the pool with my brother because he work in a pool in high bridge pool that in Manhattan but the pool is the one in upstate New York call FDR pool that is one of the best pool is like 15ft deep and you…[Read more]

  • In a New York Times article by Richard Fausset, Richard Pérez-Peña, and Campbell Robertson, “Alton Sterling Shooting In Baton Rouge Prompts Justice Dept. Investigation,” NYTimes.com, 6 July 2016, the authors are s

    • Randy replied 3 years ago

      Dear Jeremy

      I am Mad about the two white officers in your post…“Alton Sterling Shooting,” because they just wanted to kill somebody and they thought they was going to get away with it.
      One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is: “i’m a Hispanic boy that lives in a neighborhood just like the one that the shooting happen or they could kill one of my family member. ” I think this is perfect because it’s true , back in 2005 my cousin got shot by a cop , 2 girls was fighting and my cousin took the knife from one of the girls and put it in the air to get the cops attention so the cops could stop the fight , and they just shot him on the spot , they didn’t ask no questions they just shot, that’s why this sentence stands out to me cause its actual facts.

      Another sentence that stood out to me was: “Two white officers were arrested by arresting Alton B. Sterling, 37, early Tuesday after responding to a call about an armed man. The officers had Mr. Sterling pinned to the ground when at least one of them shot him. ” This stood out for me because it was a lie mr sterling did not have a gun and the cop had just shot him for no reason

      I do not agree with you that… One reason I say this is… because they were racist they should be in jail #BLA
      Thanks for your writing. I look forward to seeing what you write next,

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  • Jeremy posted an update 3 years, 1 month ago

    What’s new in my life is that i had a great weekend because i went to the pool with my brother and my sisters we had a nice in till my cousin told me that he was in the hospital because his leg was looking ugly cause he had broke his leg already but we went to the hospital on Saturday and we was in the hospital in till the next day.

  • Jeremy posted an update 3 years, 1 month ago

    What’s new in my life is that i’m looking for a job so i can help my mom with the phone bill, And you know i’m trying to pass to the 9th grade and pass all my class. At first i thought i was not going to have summer school but i was getting lazying at the end of the year so i did’t do that much work for ELA but all my other class i’m pass them but…[Read more]

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