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    People living in the US should have rights of life, liberty, freedom, and property. They should also have the rights of a citizen, like to vote or do go whatever they feel. Not having these rights makes people in

    American Dream

    People living in the US should have rights of life, liberty, freedom, and property. They should also have the rights of a citizen, like to vote or do go whatever they feel. Not having these rights makes people in...

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    People living in the US should have rights of life, liberty, freedom, and property. They should also have the rights of a citizen, like to vote or do go whatever they feel. Not having these rights makes people

    What rights should people in the U.S. have?

    People living in the US should have rights of life, liberty, freedom, and property. They should also have the rights of a citizen, like to vote or do go whatever they feel. Not having these rights makes people in...

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    I am from my silver necklace

    From soccer balls and cartoons

    I am from “poor and broken-down houses”

    From yelling and shootings in my neighborhood

    I am from blooming sunflowers

    Whose leaves are green and tal

    Where I’m From

    I am from my silver necklace From soccer balls and cartoons I am from “poor and broken-down houses” From yelling and shootings in my neighborhood I am from blooming sunflowers Whose leaves are green and tall I am a doll house and toy cars From my...

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    • Jaylin, though I do not know you personally, I think that they way in which you express yourself in this poem is simply beautiful. By describing yourself through things you love and enjoy, you portray a sense of individualism that is unique from any other person. Please continue to create works such as this one as I found it very beautiful, especially the line that says, “I am from what makes me happy.” Thank you for sharing.

    • Jaylin,

      Hello Jaylin, my name is Kayden Milburn from Judge Memorial High School. I found your post to be very beautiful. I am very engaging in poetry and I loved reading about your post. I know you so little, but I felt as if I could get a small glimpse of your extraordinary life and how wonderful it may be. I enjoyed how it told a story and that story progressed. It seem as your maturity going through the poem became more relevant as I was reading. Thank you for your post and keep making great work.

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