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Jaylin wrote a new post
People living in the US should have rights of life, liberty, freedom, and property. They should also have the rights of a citizen, like to vote or do go whatever they feel. Not having these rights makes people in
Read MorePeople living in the US should have rights of life, liberty, freedom, and property. They should also have the rights of a citizen, like to vote or do go whatever they feel. Not having these rights makes people in...
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I agree with what you wrote this this how america should look and feel like.
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Jaylin wrote a new post
People living in the US should have rights of life, liberty, freedom, and property. They should also have the rights of a citizen, like to vote or do go whatever they feel. Not having these rights makes people
Read MorePeople living in the US should have rights of life, liberty, freedom, and property. They should also have the rights of a citizen, like to vote or do go whatever they feel. Not having these rights makes people in...
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Jaylin commented on the post, What Does It Mean to Be American?
Dear Camryn,
I am interested by your letter, “What does it mean to be an American,” because it gives me an idea about how to be and feel apart of America. It also tells me how I should follow my dreams, and although everyone else’s dreams aren’t similar, I shouldn’t give up on mine.
One sentence that stood out to me is, “People ask themselves,…Read More -
Jaylin wrote a new post
I am from my silver necklace
From soccer balls and cartoons
I am from “poor and broken-down houses”
From yelling and shootings in my neighborhood
I am from blooming sunflowers
Whose leaves are green and tal
Read MoreI am from my silver necklace From soccer balls and cartoons I am from “poor and broken-down houses” From yelling and shootings in my neighborhood I am from blooming sunflowers Whose leaves are green and tall I am a doll house and toy cars From my...
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Jaylin, though I do not know you personally, I think that they way in which you express yourself in this poem is simply beautiful. By describing yourself through things you love and enjoy, you portray a sense of individualism that is unique from any other person. Please continue to create works such as this one as I found it very beautiful, especially the line that says, “I am from what makes me happy.” Thank you for sharing.
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Jaylin,
Hello Jaylin, my name is Kayden Milburn from Judge Memorial High School. I found your post to be very beautiful. I am very engaging in poetry and I loved reading about your post. I know you so little, but I felt as if I could get a small glimpse of your extraordinary life and how wonderful it may be. I enjoyed how it told a story and that story progressed. It seem as your maturity going through the poem became more relevant as I was reading. Thank you for your post and keep making great work.
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Jaylin commented on the post, Where I'm From
Dear Emily,
I am intrigued by your poem because you’re comparing yourself to many different things,for example; nature and your personal life. The part of the poem that caught my interest was when you expressed all that you have been through in the beginning, like parades and ice skating. I also love when you said at the end of your poem how y…Read More
I agree with everything you wrote keep moving forward.