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Jaylene commented on the post, A Happy Place
Dear Juan,
I am amazed by your poem, “A happy place” because it caught my eye and kept me interested. Even thought it was short it had a lot to tell.
One line that stands out for me is, “Out here I can feel the gloom.”. I think this line is interesting because it shows how a place can change someone’s mood.
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