Jenessa. I think you bring up a very important topic in today society. I agree that the immigrants should not have taken the day off work and school to get their point across. I think they needed a way to get their voices heard but I feel there’s much better ways to do it. So far rallying has not done much but they need to be looking for more…Read More

Tala. You bring up a very interesting topic that I have not really thought about. I guess I always realized it but I do not think I have given it much thought. I think you make a very good point about the ideas we get in our heads growing up and how some change over time while others do not. I think the idea of a good first impression is very…Read More

Naomi. I think it is a very good idea for you to bring this up to bring awareness to this problem. I had no idea that plastic in water was such a major factor. I did not think that big companies would be so willing to help with the problem but you make it seem like they voluntarily did it without hassle. I do not know if I am just missing…Read More

Kristy. I really like how you write it seems very professional. I also really like the topic you have chosen to write about and how society turns its back on it and makes it “taboo” like you said. What you wrote is very interesting and how you write about makes it interesting. I am sure that people who are going through this will agree with what…Read More

Matt. I think you did a very good job with this essay and even though I am in support of Hillary I found many good points in your work. I also don’t think that our current system is the most effective system we could be using to elect a leader but what you said about how that’s the way it has been for a long time is a good point. Your essay also…Read More