I really enjoyed reading about your name and the meaning behind it. A line that I enjoyed reading was “My full name is Angie Cassandra Cedillo the Significance to my first name was given to me by my aunt and mother.” It’s cool that you know who gave your name. Another line that I enjoyed reading was “I grew into my name and I now know…[Read more]
I really enjoyed reading about your name. Your last names is really interesting and how one of them shows the guatemalan side of you. A line that I really enjoyed reading was ” Luis reminds me of my 5 AM wake up time to workout.” I can relate to you because I also work out and I enjoy it like you do too. Another line that I reading was…[Read more]
My name is Mauro Delpino. I am a senior at Fremont High School in Oakland, California. My teacher gave us a list of students who had to do a Shadow Box project and she also gave us links so as a class we can appreciate them. I chose to comment on your post because I appreciated the amount of soccer logos and flags that were included. I also enjoy watching and playing soccer therefore I respect your shadow box. Anyways, I have some questions for you:
Why do you decide to include the pictures on the left?
Do you play soccer? If so, What position?
What’s your favorite soccer team?
Finally, I applaud and commend the work put into your shadow box and I am looking forward for your next projects.
Thank you for sharing your work.My name is Evelyn Diaz and I am a student at Fremont High School.
Something I liked about your work was that you added different pictures that represented who you are.Something I have a question about is Since when do you play soccer?. Please feel free to comment on my work in the future.The address of my student blog is http://evelyndfhs2021.edublogs.org/2017/11/07/assignment-5/ .
Thank you for sharing your work. I love how you added specific stuff about soccer because I myself love soccer and that shows how you love soccer. Also I like the paragraph that you wrote because it said a lot in just one paragraph which shows that you’re a good writer.
Something you should have added in your paragraph is that you should have said when you started playing soccer and what position you play. Other than that you did very good keep up the good work.
Sincerely, Bryan Moreno
This is a youth-powered publishing platform that was started in 2003 by a group of teachers from local sites of the National Writing Project.
We merged several earlier blogging projects. We have found that there are many advantages to bringing students together in one site that lives beyond any particular class. It’s easier for individual students to read and write about their own passions, to connect with other students, comment on each other’s work, and create multimedia posts for each other. Further, it’s been exciting for us to pool our knowledge about curriculum, connected learning, and digital literacies.
There are over 8,000 posts and over 13,000 comments by young people on the site on topics as diverse as the American Dream, Shakespeare, and sports as well as original poems and stories.
Youth Voices is a platform for youth to write about their interests, both in school and outside of school: what they are reading, what their hobbies or future careers might be, what they enjoy in their spare time. Like all of us, students follow our national leadership and form opinions. They are also welcome to write about those topics as well.
Youth Voices is fully non-partisan and welcomes youth of all types, from all regions, and with all viewpoints. Educators support youth in writing and thoughtfully responding to each other through the use of commenting guides, using tags to show common interests, playlists to support self-guided inquiry; opinions expressed by writers are their own.
If being part of such a community makes sense to you, we invite you to join us. We welcome all youth and any teacher interested in having students publish online and participate in the give and take of a social network like Youth Voices.