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Jimmy commented on the post, The Literary Side of Ocean Pollution
Annika,
Your article on the issues with pollution in our oceans was very well written and captured my attention. We need to make improvements for collecting pollutants in an efficient matter. We use the oceans water supply everyday and in order to keep it clean this message must be spread. Thank you for your post! -
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Where I’m From
by Jimmy Budd
I am from football gloves,
from Nike and polyester.
I am from cold Fall nights,
from grid and dirt.
I am from cold goodbyes and happy beginnings,
where the middle seems l
Read MoreWhere I’m From by Jimmy Budd I am from football gloves, from Nike and polyester. I am from cold Fall nights, from grid and dirt. I am from cold goodbyes and happy beginnings, where the middle seems lost. I am from isolation in the wilderness, from countless hours...
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This is a really sweet poem that gives depth into who you are and what defines you. Well written!
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Jimmy,
I really liked your poem. Just 16 lines gave me insight into who you are and what made you that way. I liked how you incorporated many different aspects of your life, like cold fall nights, a never disappearing wish, and even fried chicken. It all helped me see a little of what shaped you and what you’re like. Thank you for your post.
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Jimmy commented on the post, Important Person-Cordova
Olivia,
I deeply enjoyed your post as it is showing off one of the positively minded people you have in your school. It is great to have an adult to talk to in school, who you can just lay everything out to unfiltered. I play football as well and know how down to Earth some coaches can be, but when it comes to study and preparation they are as…Read More -
Jordan, thank you for sharing this amazing piece of writing with the world. Your piece really spoke volumes to me as it reminded me of myself. I have little pressure from my parents in my everyday life, so I can not blame them for the stress or anxiety I face each day. Stress is something that can completely damage you for a short amount of time,…Read More
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Jimmy commented on the post, Where I'm From I.S.O.
Autumn, I really enjoyed your piece of writing and thank you for sharing it with the world. Your poem was visually apparent to me as every phrase of your piece made me feel like I was in your shoes. Thanks!
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Jimmy,
I love this poem. It’s very personal and gives the reader a good idea of who you are and what made you the way you are.:) Hope to hear more written by you!