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    Hello, my name is Jaime Orozco and I am presenting a topic that I want to research for a research project.  

    This is a project we get when we are seniors, which is called senior defense. We have to pass it in

    Senior Defense Discussion - Mindfulness

    Hello, my name is Jaime Orozco and I am presenting a topic that I want to research for a research project.   This is a project we get when we are seniors, which is called senior defense. We have to...

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    • Jaime, I think there is a lot of potential stories out there. It sounds like an inspirational piece just waiting. I briefly googled and all that popped up was healing yourself through self-love. treeoflifecenterus.com/healing-through-self-love/ says that it’s a combination of eating, reflecting, and giving to let the ‘love flow’. I’m not sure if this is the direction you’re going. I’d say go out and interview people (both sick and doctors) if this is something you want to pursue. My fear is that you’re going to be thrown off track and your thesis isn’t going to be clear enough since everyone’s ‘mindfulness’ is most likely going to be different. Not to mention people might attribute the life spans to medicine and their outlook as a fluke.

    • Hello Jaime! I do believe that the body finds a way to heal itself sometimes, but not all sickness are bearable to set aside. People with alzheimer’s can’t simply live life to the fullest, some are so far gone that they can’t live their life in order, they get confused and their memory gets shuffled sometimes. From this website, https://www.alz.org/alzheimers_disease_what_is_alzheimers.asp, it says “current Alzheimer’s treatments cannot stop Alzheimer’s from progressing.” This means that some diseases don’t stay at a certain state forever, some untreated diseases can get worse and make living horrible. It really depends on how bad the sickness is. I do agree that mindfulness can help people with anxiety. What do you hope to find out more about this topic? I am interested to see what more you do with topic. Do you believe being mindful is worth not taking medication? But if there is nothing more a sick person can do for themselves, then I agree that they should try to live a happy life to the end. I hope to see more about your paper. Bye.

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    Why am I happy as hell

    Why look at the world

    So mad

    When you can be happy

    Yea things may happen

    But we can move on from them

    Being sad and mad is

    Not going to fix it what fixes thing is

    why I am happy

    Why am I happy as hell Why look at the world So mad When you can be happy Yea things may happen But we can move on from them Being sad and mad is Not going to fix it what fixes thing...

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    • I like how you talk about that you being happy and you cannot change it by being mad.

    • Dear Jaime,

      Very well done. I didn’t know you were quite the poet. Your piece represents a huge part of your identity and that no matter what happiness is the key to living a fulfilling. Thanks for sharing the piece.

      SIncerely,
      Vesna Sot

    • Dear Jaime,

      Good job getting your poem done. I am glad to see that you are able to express how happy you are through this poem. Happiness is definitely the key to life.

    • Good job on explaining why you are happy as hell. This poem shows how being happy helps people get trough the hard times. This poem is a good solid poem.

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    Jaime Orozco JR  

    02/09/2018

    English 4

    Ms. Oliver

     

    I was named after my dad and my dad was named  after his mom’s dad. I like my name because my dad is a hard working man. More than just being my dad, he i

    Jaime Orozco JR   02/09/2018 English 4 Ms. Oliver   I was named after my dad and my dad was named  after his mom’s dad. I like my name because my dad is a hard working man. More than just being my dad, he...

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    • Good Work Jimmy !!!

    • Dear Jaime Orozco JR

      Your post was a really good and interesting post. You put a lot of emotion into it. I liked how you explained everything. You made it very clear so that the reader could understand what they were reading. One sentence that really sticks out to me was the “Most fathers are not involved in their kids life. If my father was absent in my life it would have been way harder for me.” I liked this sentence because it its true if someone would grow up without a father it would be really hard for them because they wouldn’t have a dad. It would also mean that the mom would of have to work extra hard for raise all of the children. You know that would suck. Another sentence that sticked out to me was “My father came into the United States with only the clothes on his back. From this he has been able to build a better life for him and his family.” This sentence sticked out to me because idk it just does. Your post reminds of me of when like this guy told me a story. Thanks for writing I look forward to seeing another one of your amazing posts.

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