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  • Hey, Hatou I enjoy reading your poem. Did you know that blue or lavender is a stress relieving color and lavender can relieve your stress also. I like how you said that it helps you put up with school. It seems like their is a lot of bullying in your school and that going to this park helps you to cope with all that bullying. I can also relate to…Read More

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    Beyond the bipolar weather of steaming summers and blustery winters

    Beyond the spaces where pollen fluctuates and mold grows

    Beyond the honking of cars and screeching of brakes of afternoon traffic

    The Warmth of a City

    Beyond the bipolar weather of steaming summers and blustery winters Beyond the spaces where pollen fluctuates and mold grows Beyond the honking of cars and screeching of brakes of afternoon traffic jams Like UT students roaming the streets at night or the bar...

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    • Dear Jada :

      I am fascinated by your poem, “The Warmth of A City,” because I love how your poem described the place so well. It felt as I was there my self. I had a whole image about this place with just your description.

      One part of your poem that stands out for me is where your flow was neat. I think this is incredible because some people can never keep a flow through out some poems. And its incredible how neat and clear your poem is. Your poem is very well structured!

      Another part that I liked is where you used the word ¨beyond¨ or ¨Before¨ as a starting sentence. This stood out for me because those two starting sentences you sticked with made your poem well structured in my eyes.

      Your reminds me of something that I made once. One time…

      Thanks for your . I look forward to seeing what you make next, because…

    • Your poem reminds of something that I made once. One time, I had to make a poem of my place and it was really hard getting all descriptive and keeping a well structured poem and a good flow through out the whole poem.

      Thanks for your poem! I look forward to seeing what you make next because this poem is really incredible!

    • Dear Jada,
      I am intrigued by your poem, because… It Is about mother nature and mother nature really motivates me because of how beautiful it is.

      One thing you said that stands out for me is: “Beyond the honking of cars and screeching of brakes of afternoon traffic jams” I think this is intelligent because… It is something common in the city but its also very cool to talk about because not everyone lives in the city.Your poem reminds me of something that happened to me. One time… Because i love the city and how beautiful it is. Cities at night are like the stars glowing super bright because of all the lights from the buildings.

      Thanks for your project. I look forward to seeing what you write next because… This poem was very motivating in a way but also very interesting to read about.I am excited to see what you will write about next!!

    • Dear Jada,
      I am intrigued by your poem, because… It Is about mother nature and mother nature really stands out to me because of how beautiful it is.

      One thing you said that stands out for me is: “Beyond the honking of cars and screeching of brakes of afternoon traffic jams” I think this is intelligent because… It is something common in the city but its also very cool to talk about because not everyone lives in the city.Your poem reminds me of something that happened to me. One time… Because i love the city and how beautiful it is. Cities at night are like the stars glowing super bright because of all the lights from the buildings.

      Thanks for your project. I look forward to seeing what you write next because… This poem was very motivating in a way but also very interesting to read about.I am excited to see what you will write about next!!

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    The carnival is important to me because it comes around on my birthday and it gives me a place to have fun. When you first walk into the carnival you smell funnel cakes, corn dogs and cow poop. You hear

    The Carnival

    The carnival is important to me because it comes around on my birthday and it gives me a place to have fun. When you first walk into the carnival you smell funnel cakes, corn dogs and cow poop. You...

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    • Just as important as it is to be one with yourself , fun brings that out. This is a good description of what it means to have a good time, and how the place around you can change the view of what happiness means to you.

    • The carnival is also one of the places I love. The pictures are nice and you gave good descriptions.

    • Dear jada,
      I am happy about your poem because carnivals were a big part of my childhood.
      One part of your poem that stands out for me is where you describe the smell of the funnel cake. I think this is awesome because that’s how I remember the carnival. The smell of funnel cake and me always wanting to eat it . Thanks for your poem. I look forward to seeing what you make next because you did a good job explaining how you view the carnival.

  • dear Aldephe, I feel like i agree with you 100 percent.
    the world chooses to ignore that we have a gun violence problem. So childish Gambino made this music video he was bringing it to america’s attention to realize whats happening around us because we are so caught up in entertainment that we don’t know whats happening or we growing careless. I…Read More

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    It is said that 50 percent of the world population make up introverts and the other 50 percent is made of extroverts.  As an introvert I thrive in low-key activities and low social activities. Sometimes, I

    Why am I so detached and aloof from people sometimes

    It is said that 50 percent of the world population make up introverts and the other 50 percent is made of extroverts.  As an introvert I thrive in low-key activities and low social activities. Sometimes, I rather daydream than...

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    • Staring off with numbers gets the attention of some people and it was a good way to start. The article was well structured and including a source made it more credible. I feel that if you were to include more examples from those who are extroverts and introverts it would make your article more appealing. Other than that you did a great job. Do you think someone can be both, an introvert and an extrovert?

    • I like the structure of your essay and how it is well organized. Introverts and extroverts both have positive sides and negative sides. I don’t think one is better than the other. If you’re an introvert, you should enjoy your life as an introvert and if you’re an extrovert you should enjoy your life as an extrovert. Also, I like the examples that you gave about how you enjoy your time.

    • Hi Jada,
      This is a very interesting post. I personally think that myself is a very extroverts people but also a very introverts person at the same time. Because I learned that sometimes you don’t have to think too much about what other people think about you. You can do whatever you want to do and maybe have some friends have the same interest with you. You can make your own choice to either stay alone or go out and play with your friends. There no good or bad.
      Sincerely,
      Clinton Kwong.

      Here is a link that might help you:
      https://www.fastcompany.com/3016031/are-you-an-introvert-or-an-extrovert-and-what-it-means-for-your-career
      There are some resources about introverts and extroverts . Good luck!

    • Dear Jada, 
      I am fascinated by your post , “ Why am I so detached and aloof from people sometimes”  because I personally relate to it. I am just like you , an introvert, and I tend to think the same way you do, I like being in my own personal bubble with my own thoughts and such. This is just very interesting because extroverted people are very outgoing compared to introverts, we tend to just be alone most of the time and be okay with it. One sentence you wrote that stood out to me is, “ Sometimes, I rather daydream than socialize because I think if I socialize people would criticize my opinions on everything including the world.” I think this is very relatable because I feel the same way at times, I believe that everyone will criticize what I would say which is why I tend to not say much around a lot of people. Overall, thank you for writing about this. I look forward to reading what you write next because I think I relate to you in some ways. 
       Karen S. 

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