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    Six long years

    Eleven great roles

    It’s time to say goodbye

    And pour out our souls

     

    We sit all together

    In the basement we share

    To show all our companions

    How much we really care

     

    Although we are lea

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    Six long years Eleven great roles It’s time to say goodbye And pour out our souls   We sit all together In the basement we share To show all our companions How much we really care   Although we are leaving We will never forget The memories we made We won't even...

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    • Creating a poem around something you’ve been able to experience with one group for four years is crazy beautiful and amazing its inspirational. I like how the poem represent something you’re leaving but you’ll never leave it for good.

    • Holden, this is such a sweet poem. I love how sentimental and heart warming it is.

    • This poem is beautiful. Its very touching and makes the reader feel for you.

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    allison has

    a widow’s peak

     

    always shown

    never mentioned

     

    it sits

    a frame

    for her face

     

    she looks

    like dracula

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    allison has a widow’s peak   always shown never mentioned   it sits a frame for her face   she looks like dracula

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    • Holden,
      Very nice poem and I really enjoyed the comment about looking like Dracula. I found it very funny.

    • Hi Holden,

      Awesome poem about your friend, Allison! I really enjoyed it, especially the lines “always shown” and “never mentioned.”

    • Hi Holden,
      Very interesting poem. I like how you talk about Allison’s widows peak that no one mentions it, yet people think she looks like dracula. Very funny.

    • This is one of the best poems I’ve read recently- I love the unique description that really gives me a good mental image

  • This is a very powerful perspective on adoption that better explains similar stances on adoption that are often don’t go into much detail so thank you for opening our eyes to the difficulties of daily life often experienced by adoptees. Thank you for putting your time into researching this topic and showing the true parts of life.

    From,
    Chloe &…

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    In the style of Giovanni.

     

    Rave Poem

    the lights when up

    the crowd went silent

    and the room went dead

    when suddenly the lights went up

    in vibrant colors

    and bright lights ablaze

    and the crowd went

    Rave Poem

    In the style of Giovanni.   Rave Poem the lights when up the crowd went silent and the room went dead when suddenly the lights went up in vibrant colors and bright lights ablaze and the crowd went wild with amazing energy and fascinating joy

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    • Holden,
      This is a really beautiful poem. It;s like I’m at the rave (even though I’ve never been to one). Thank you so much for sharing.
      Ariel 🙂

    • Hi Holden! I really like this poem. It has great imagery! It reminds me when I saw Louis the Child, have you ever heard of them?

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